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(Chapter 45) - Thu 15 Oct 2009

Love how you are writing Kagome back with her family. Also really like how you gave reason for her family being so lay back about her traveling through the Well. I got a gut feeling Sesshoumaru is in for it not telling Kagome about the mating bond.

 

Wispr


(Chapter 43) - Wed 14 Oct 2009

Oh I love how you got Sesshoumaru acting around Kagome and I like her family reactions... great work!

 

Wispr


(Chapter 42) - Wed 14 Oct 2009

Another awesome chapter... love the lineup of villains you got going here and also how you are doing the growing feelings between those two.

 

Wispr


(Chapter 41) - Wed 14 Oct 2009

The talk between Kagome and Sesshoumaru about how her and Inuyasha's realtionship fail was wonderfully done. The reasoning was believable and I liked that it was both of their faults... so often stories with this pairing turn into Inuyasha bashing.

 

Wispr


(Chapter 40) - Wed 14 Oct 2009

Bloody cute and heartwarming chapter. Really doing their getting to know one another again very well.

 

Wispr


(Chapter 39) - Wed 14 Oct 2009

Damn that was well done, love how you did the bath scene... really captured their unique personalities very wll in such an embarressing and arousing situation.

 

Wispr


(Chapter 38) - Wed 14 Oct 2009

Love how you did Kagome's reaction to Sesshoumaru and how you did his inn beast talking.

Great work!

 

Wispr


(Chapter 37) - Wed 14 Oct 2009

Oh bloody aweful ending... ;)

 

Wispr


(Chapter 36) - Wed 14 Oct 2009

I have to say I have been eagerly waiting for this moment to arrive and yet due to your awesome writing skill it hasn't felt drugged out one bit.

 

Wispr


(Chapter 35) - Wed 14 Oct 2009

WOW... really loved your character Iyona, wonderful story arc!

 

Wispr


(Chapter 33) - Wed 14 Oct 2009

Sesshoumaru's son Taro is a sneaky little cuz ain't he. Bloody good chapter as always.

 

Wispr


(Chapter 31) - Wed 14 Oct 2009

Fantastic rescue scene... love how the two ladies escaped and what Sesshoumaru did to Kagome's kidnapper.

 

Wispr


(Chapter 30) - Wed 14 Oct 2009

Love the details you put into Kagome's kidnapping. Also you made me feel so bad for Kira... bloody good work!

 

Wispr


(Chapter 29) - Wed 14 Oct 2009

Wicked awesome story you got going here. Love the plots you are weaving and the character depth of the poeple within each chapter.

 

Wispr


(Chapter 28) - Tue 13 Oct 2009

Really like how you are advancing your story line. Makes for such an enjoyable read. Also like how realistic the planning and such is.

 

Wispr


Rabidwoodchuck (Chapter 70) - Tue 13 Oct 2009

i just wanted to say thank you for notifying you followers at fanfic.net that the story, 'Choices and Consequences'

is continued here on Dokuga. I was worring over the lack of updates at FanFic. Once i found the story again, i realised i was quite a bit behind.

Thanks again for the post and thanks for the story. I can't wait till the next installment.


Edina (Chapter 70) - Tue 13 Oct 2009

i freakin love this tory so plsplsplspleeeeease update soon. kagome is BA!


(Chapter 27) - Tue 13 Oct 2009

I really like how you are writing the demons reactions and plans to the growing human problem. So fascinting how you have Kagome a part and yet apart from your story. Wonderful work.

 

Wispr


(Chapter 26) - Tue 13 Oct 2009

What is happening with Sango and Miroku is truly heartbreaking... but also so very real.

Great writing.

 

Wispr


(Chapter 25) - Tue 13 Oct 2009

Really enjoying this story of yours... each chapter bring forth another interesting facet of this gem of a story. Bloody good work.

 

Wispr


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