Shun was a complete idiot! I do feel bad for him, but I would be pissed if my other half believed his friend who was known for harassing people over me too. He's going to have to sit back and just wait for her forgiveness. he can't get out of this one.

Thank you so much for the new chapter! I love how Sesshoumaru took care of Kagome! She is so lucky to have him in her life. Thank you for writing this story from Sesshoumaru's point of view. I'm glad to see how much he cares for Kagome. Please post more soon!

Damn Tenchi...to have a friend believed over a mate? That's just wrong. Bad kitty Shun! I see it is going to take a while to earn back the trust.

Even though I'm too stupid to know who Shun is I'm really mad at him! How dare he not believe what Kagome tells him. Doesn't he know her well enough to know that she wouldn't make something like that up? Doesn't he realize that his friend could do stuff to her without leaving his scent on her? Thank goodness Sesshoumaru believes her! I really, really hope that Sesshoumaru beats Haru up and teaches him to respect his mate. I'm so angry that Shun didn't kick Haru out of the house, still ate with him and drove him to the base after Kagome's accusations. Even if he didn't believe her he should have realized how uncomfortable it would be for her to be in the same house as Haru. Poor Kagome gives up so much to make both of her mates happy. I'm glad that Sesshoumaru at least loves her enough to trust her. Great update! Can't wait for more!

I see haru getting his butt kicked by Shun before Sess even gets a chance. Now that would be just awesome! Then again, she could turn this around and have both mates ready to "take care" of her daily....jealousy ploys always work.

That was fantastic! I enjoyed it immensely and I think this was a great way to respond to the challenge. I look forward to reading more of your work Dana

I can't tell you how much I'm loving this universe of yours that you've created. I look forward to each and every installment. Bonus karma for you and your token has been delivered!

I know the feeling. My husband always steals my chocolate cheesecake joy. I have to sneak and eat it when he's not here too. Love the oneshots, they are wonderful.

...Wow...Just wow... It not only had an interesting closet idea, but the whole chapter was mostly about cheesecake and cherry pies. Delicious, in both writing and food!

I love the chapter and knowing you are going to make it a story has me so excited. I will be looking for it.

I love how everything is linked together in some way. When is the Superbowl update coming? I love both of these stories. Great job on describing her grieving actions due to her grandfather passing, I kinda acted the same when a close relative passed away.

Love Tied in Knots!!! Nothing wrong with a little "Tie me up, Tie me down" at all! Wonderfully written!

Beautifully described. You should have someone draw this out for you.

Oh tenchi, I have no words to describe how beautifully written this piece is. I loved it and love the idea of a tattoo like that. Just wonderful! Karma for you and your token has been delivered!

Ah.. so sweet... You did amazing for this challenge. It was nice to see things in Shun's point of view. These little moments you create are amazing.

Wow! A beautifully written chapter Tenchi! I am in awe of your brilliance.

aw. That was cute! >.<

I have really enjoyed this so far. I am hoping to learn about Shun in the future, I feel like I got dropped in the middle of a world I know nothing about. There are so many questions... Guess that is what Kagome felt like coming out of the well.