This was such a wonderful piece of literature, i absolutely loved it!! You did such a great job with this story, its amazing!!
I especially loved how you put everything in it, like heartache, betrayal, humour, hotness, tears, joy, suspense, a great plot line, and the characters you used were well written. The story was fantastic, even the ending, Kagome got her happiness back, Bankotsu got the family he always wanted, and Sesshomaru got better from the illness that plagued him. Though him and Kagome were no longer together, from what i got from the ending was, there still is a possiblity as she is still his mate and the two of them will probably live forever, and Bankotsu is still only human.
I don't know i could just be asuming alot right now, but thats how i read it!
But once again, GREAT STORY!!!!
Excellent piece of work you have here! I really enjoyed it. Good job :)
That was the most saddest ending EVER! T__T
I'm so sad that the story is finished D: I hope you'll make a continuation. And you hinted at her living longer than bankotsu...will she ever end up with him? That's so sad...I feel bad for Sesshomaru D; But in a sad sort of way everything worked out...You really did this amazingly! I loved the pace you set for the story as well. Your such a good writer and I shall be reading more of your works : )
I hope you make a sequel! Thanks for writing this~
I do not believe that I have reviewed this story yet... Words seem to fall short (for me anyway) when I think about this story. It was a fantastic ride filled with heartbreak and hope, joy and pain. It grabbed me with the first chapter and did not let go. I cried with your characters and laughed with them as well. Bravo!
So wonderful. I am so proud of Sesshoumaru for coming such a long way. You made him to be a respectable man in this story. Even if he didn't get the girl in the end, it was still good.
Bravo! What an ending! It was a long, wild ride, and I enjoyed every chapter of it.
Start to finish this story was beautifully written. I'll admit in the beginning I wanted Sesshoumaru and Kagome to get back together, but as the story went on and and the depth of their problems were brought to light I realized that was not likely to happen. The ending was a perfect fit to the rest of the story. It not only brought closure to Kagome and Sesshoumaru (while still leaving some room for the unknown future), but you began the healing process for Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha too. This has to be one of my personal favorites now! Good job!
Ava 365 (Chapter 48) - Tue 19 May 2009
Awwwwww!!! It's over so soon!!!! I'll have withdrawal... I became addicted to this story!!!! Though I never left any reviews, sorry about that! One thing kept bugging me through the story, and that is if Kagome and Sesshomaru were mated and he were to redeem himself before her. Is there a chance they will end up together, I mean, Kagome will outlive Bankotsu at some point, right? And now that the story is over and Kagome is still with Bankotsu I wonder if there will be a sequel to this story in which long after Bankotsu is dead of old age Kagome and Sesshomaru meet again and he wins her over.... Is it too much to ask?
Anyway, if there isn't any I guess there will be one in my fantasies... Dreaming is easy. Keep up the great work!!! I may not leave reviews but so far I've been a silent reader to all of your fics, might not be so silent anymore.
Ava 365
Chelsea H. (Chapter 48) - Tue 19 May 2009
Excellent story.........this so reminds me of other stories I've read of heartaches. It was so fantastically written and so beautiful. In the end we can only hope that Bank does something stupid so that Sesshomaru and Kagome can be together again. But as long as she is happy, its all good!!!!!!!! Can't wait for your next story, looking forward to it.
SaraSama (Chapter 48) - Tue 19 May 2009
Stunning. Your story read like a finely crafted novel. I found myself looking for updates and grateful that you updated so frequently. It was really well-written and eloquently done.
… I was shock to see this was the end. You left it off with things tied off but at the same time there were open ends. This plot is different from most because Sesshomaru and Kagome aren’t together in the end… yet you hint that it possible they may end up together eventually. It sounds more plausible in this sense rather than Kagome running off to be with Sesshomaru again so I am not disappointed. But this ending leaves me curious as to what may have occurred if you continued the story. Anyway, what I guess I am trying to say is you did a remarkable job with this. Congratualtions on the completion of this story!
I gotta know is there gonna be a sequel?
Hells (Chapter 48) - Tue 19 May 2009
I have read a lot of stories and each has it's own tale to tell. I've read finely written stories and i've read stories so poorly written it makes me cringe. But this story is a beautiful and enthralling work in itself. This was one of my most favored stories I have ever read and you did a great job writing it. The plot went together so smoothly and from start to end it kept my attention like no other story truly has. Congrats and this is the simply breath-taking. I shall watch out for anyone stories you write because you are a great writer.
It takes a real man to be able to admit he was wrong AND a bigger man to let his emotions show and cry. Anyone can say I'm sorry but when you see the love and emotions through tears, it just shows he too can feel enough to show you his true heart. I got to say, both my daughter and I really enjoyed Suikotsu's stand to be Switzerland. He's a good brother. JEN
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