Excuse me while I take the rest of the week to laugh! "You can't look at stuff like that! You're.. you're.. MY MOM for crying out loud!" has to be one of the classic lines of all times!
| omg i just read 1 - 3 and LGP's gunna get you@! he's such a delightfully pervi puppy t0o! more please ^_^
Dana (Chapter 3) - Sun 02 Aug 2009
| Okay, so I was reading the challenge page for the toxic prompt and as you seemed to as well, the first thing I thought of was Britney Spears.
I have to say, that this was possibly one of the funniest damn things I have ever read. I was sitting here laughing my ass of at the computer.
Good Job
Dana
| OMG OMG OMG, that is hilarious!!!! hahahahaha, double karma for Monti! You've already nabbed your token. I had to listen to the song while reading this too :P
Kirche (Chapter 2) - Mon 13 Jul 2009
| very nice, very hot. I love how you introduced this scenario. My only suggestion is to change "drool" to "Saliva".
| yay! Underpants theft! I liked both chapters!
rowdysgirl (Chapter 2) - Sun 12 Jul 2009
| MontiK! MontiK! Girl, you really made my day!
First with the chapter about cosplay,
And then with a chapter ‘bout blueberry pie,
And kinda gross, sexy things that made me sigh!
You’re the one, yes, you’re the one,
You wrote these chapters that were loads of fun!
And I'm laughing still!
Smittee (Chapter 2) - Sun 12 Jul 2009
| Mmmmmmmmmmmm.....Smittee liked that a LOT, Monti. Wow...Just wow...Nice description. Great mix of pie and naughty.
I absolutely adore what you've started here! I love the idea that Sesshomaru has mellowed out and become quite a flirty and mischevious 'puppy' at times.
tessahime (Chapter 1) - Fri 10 Apr 2009
| That was waaaayyyy too cute! I actually giggled!
| Well, for whatever reason for which prompted you to write this, I thank you. I just had the best fit of giggles that I truly needed this night. JEN
Well, yeah, that was definitely random... but really fun XD.
There's an aftertaste of 'reviens-y' lol (meaning... and then, what's happening next? kuh kuh kuh)
Dewa mata
| O.o Kags can't catch a break can she? Lol if you told Sesshomaru he'd be ripping off a humans skirt in the future (part if it anyway) you'd be a pile of goop. Very Cute though ^_^
Smittee (Chapter 1) - Thu 09 Apr 2009
*giggles fest* So, that's how she got the idea! *leaves door unlocked, for random people of the past to find me, and gives me awesome stories to write* Mwahahaha!
Teensie-sama (Chapter 1) - Thu 09 Apr 2009
"When did he become such a perv?" I love that. As if he was never a perv to begin with. I mean, she was dressed so scantilly no one really needed to 'do' much to be a perv, do they? *drool* Good job. And I LOVE princess peach. I am dying to find the OLD nintendo system with the REALLY old Mario game with Pricness Peach digging up vegies to throw at the little monsters :P
~Ts
Teensie-sama (Chapter 1) - Thu 09 Apr 2009
"When did he become such a perv?" I love that. As if he was never a perv to begin with. I mean, she was dressed so scantilly no one really needed to 'do' much to be a perv, do they? *drool* Good job. And I LOVE princess peach. I am dying to find the OLD nintendo system with the REALLY old Mario game with Pricness Peach digging up vegies to throw at the little monsters :P
~Ts
Monti... this is insane.. :)) Finally~! i get to see Takahashi-san as a character in a fic.. :)) all she gets are credits...
-DreamWeaver
Ikaru (Chapter 1) - Thu 09 Apr 2009
| lmao......monti you should so make this a two shot.....god my sides hurt....lol.....i wanna see what happens next!!!
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