I love this story its one of my favorites. Thank you for making an awesome story :)

UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU POSSIBLY CAN PRETTY PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

I like the plot of your story, but it feels like you are rushing it too much, and too.. well straightforward.  Personally I think they are all a little OOC, usually it doesn't really bother me, but in this case, it kind of ruined the story for me.  Sorry :/

uuummmm i don't know if this has already been pointed out and if it has i apologise for being inadvertantly repedative, but a foot is twelve inches so if a person is 5'12" then they are actually 6' even.

 It's a shame you haven't gotten more reviews thus far, I know some people might be turned off by the fast pace, character portrayal, or grammer errors, but looking past all of those this is a very excellent story, and I'm definitly looking forward to more chapters being posted, hopefully sometime soon. =D

wow, i just love this story you are very creative. I have read it once before, and i have loved it ever since then. I love how you portrayed all the characters including Naraku. Keep up the great work and i can't wait for the next chapter.

*is the answer to the riddle: the Moon?*

again keep up the great work.

InuLover

i love this story since i first started reading it and i like it a lot too i love evry part to this story and the plot is good too your a very great author who wrote this very great and wonderful story.

i love this story since i first started reading it and i like it a lot too i love evry part to this story and the plot is good too your a very great author who wrote this very great and wonderful story.