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Eliona (Chapter 1) - Fri 19 Feb 2021

Great short :) loved the character growth at the end.


LadyoftheLemons (Chapter 1) - Tue 05 Mar 2019

That's hot and sweet


sr (Chapter 1) - Tue 06 Mar 2018

very nice :)   i do wonder what happened to shippo though...


Rose (Chapter 1) - Wed 02 Sep 2015

I really like it


AnimeLady04 (Chapter 1) - Sun 21 Sep 2014

I wish there was more explanation of what happened between Kagome and Sesshomaru after they left the den and how they learned to live with each other and how Kagome handled going from ningen to youkai so suddenly


SilverInu93 (Chapter 1) - Fri 13 Jun 2014

Sesshomaru is  hiding from kagome .... ROFL!!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 1) - Thu 12 Jul 2012

Great story it was HOT!!


Kristen (Chapter 1) - Tue 26 Jul 2011

Very, very amazing. I enjoyed it very much :] And I really hope to read some more as good as this in the future.


randomfan17 (Chapter 1) - Mon 27 Dec 2010

This was delightful, i loved the entire thing and especially the end (plus the hot lemon in the middle).


Duchess Of Darkness (Chapter 1) - Thu 18 Nov 2010

ME LIKEY ME LIKEY!!! OMG thats was awsome!!! I could almost use this story as reference material for my story if you dont mind. It's like a paranormal story tellers guide to Inu Romance. Those Names were beautiful by the way.


Amy (Chapter 1) - Fri 02 Jul 2010

LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! KEEP WRITING !


jojo61538 (Chapter 1) - Sat 27 Feb 2010

it was a great story keep up the great work ^_^


Kanna37 (Chapter 1) - Fri 19 Feb 2010

Damn rOo!  I had no idea you wrote this one... hot and heavy, lol! 

Amber


Saholia (Chapter 1) - Mon 27 Jul 2009
rOo!! This is wonderful! It's so realistic and I can so see the series ending like this. Beautiful ending!

Tiana+Love (Chapter 1) - Mon 16 Feb 2009
I liked it, I mean, who wouldn't?? It's very well written, but not in and overly taxing way. --> ***** <--Five Stars ^^ I didn't see any errors. I'm so happy at least some fictionist use spellcheck. I'll be checking for more of your story later. Byes!! P.S. Maybe you'll look at my challenge?? Thanks. http://dokuga.com/forum?func=view&catid=6&id=14866#14870

MontiK (Chapter 1) - Mon 16 Feb 2009

R0o! I luvs it, I was expecting more gutter but this was even better! I have to say.. I hope the r0o-sama sees fit to gift us with a sequel? *hint hint*

*huggles* MontiK


Malika (Chapter 1) - Sun 15 Feb 2009
Amazing!!! I loved every minute and second of it. Keep writing!!!

Inkasha Taisho (Chapter 1) - Sun 15 Feb 2009

 I LOVED it. I loved it. I loved it. I loved it I love it. Did I tell you I loved it!!  LOL.  This was so awesome. Especially loved the part were Sesshomaru mentioned about running from Kagome. He learns well. I really enjoyed this and I would love to see more work like this.  It was very original and tasteful. I can't how much I enjoyed this.


SarahJane Tennant (Chapter 1) - Sun 15 Feb 2009
Wow! Amazing story! I absolutly loved it..I can't wait to read more of work soon!

Deebeth89 (Chapter 1) - Sun 15 Feb 2009

I really like this but it does have some minor problems.  You're using dominate when it should be dominant, X is the dominant partner for example.  Also then is time related, you do ? now & then.  Than is ratio related, comparing 2 things like he is taller than she is & than is the 1 you should mostly use when writing not then.  I hope this helps.


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