why the hell would sesshoumaru go to Asuka over his mate? it's ridiculous and makes no sense, unless she has something on him...

Oooohh I think I know who the culprit might be!!!! N go Inu, acting all Sherlock Holmes lol please do continue

Great story! Update soon!

I love your stroy and can't wait to read more so I hope you keep up the fantastic job, and try to update asap please.

Die missterss Die right now i hate sesshomaru i hope kagome does something about this i can't wait for the nest chapter

YIKES! You know i hope kagome kills the mistress. it would make me so happy! Great story though keep up the good work can't wait until the next chapter.

Even for an ooc Kagome I don't think with her being a modern woman she'd stick around after a forced mating, being forcibly changed into demon, basically raped repeatedly, impregnated against her will, then have to deal with the guy's mistress who is treated better than her and allowed to hit her kid. Actually I can't see Sesshoumaru forgiving anyone who hit Rin or being so dishonorable.

i love your story don't listen to other peoples reviews your doin good so far and i hope u write more stories lik this in the future i just love ur plot and please write another chapter asap thank you bye!

You Know Even Though Ur Story Has A Lot Of Whole, Like Why Did Sesshomaru Make Kagome His Mate? Why Does He Honor His Mistress Over Kagome? Why He Lets Rin Get Hurt? ETC. Think That It Is A Fairly Good Story And I Can't Wait To Read More!

I have a question...why did Sesshoumaru save Kagome the way he did? He could have just used Tenseiga, could he not? I think this story really needs a lot of work, it has lots of plot holes and the characters are horribly ooc. The transitions between scenes is nonexistent and it really needs to be there because with out it the story does not flow. It makes me think you were just writing the events to write them and not take into account all of the characters true personality or how they would react in certain situations. Its like there was really no thought put into it. You need more development to make the story seem more believable. I don't think there is enough depth to your characters and I do find it a tad bit ironic that Sesshomaru has more loyalty to his mistress than to his mate. Also, Kagome in the Canon Universe is extremely modest I don't think "her mating" to Sesshomaru would have played out like that, well the way you set up the story seems completely implausible and I'm only on the second chapter.

I also meant to say that I think the premise is a wonderful idea!

ok sesshoumaru is a jerk god why on earth did he even mate kagome if he is going to treat her that way as alpha female she has the right to punish that other bitch god I really hope kagome can break that mating mark and show sesshoumaru what he will be miss for his stupid decisions. Also yes I really love this story but can you make kagome kick his sorry ass soon. Just saying......

So far I love the plot line of the story, but everything seems jumpy. One second they are doing or saying this and BAM! we're doing something else. If you could smooth it over a bit more or maybe find someone to do it for you it would make it an easier and more pleseant read.

its gettin pretty good though i agree with jessica's review as well though

i hope you make it so kagome gets away from him real soon. sesshoumaru is supposed to be honorable, but in this he is anything but that. please make kagome get away and show him what hes missing. why did he mate her if he is going to trat his mistress better that her and be a dishonorable ass!

i would have bitch slpped Asuka if i was Kagome!!!! but keep the chapters comin its awesome!!!!!

Like piper said, Sesshoumaru has dishonored both Kagome and the pup. Couldn't Kagome use this dishonor to break the mating? Since he does not treat her like a mate, couldn't she break the bond as punishment to him for not acting like a proper Alpha?

i cant stand this. sesshoumaru doesn't care about kagome and even though he says he does, he doesn't care about the pup. i mean he gives kagome a slap in the face for something stupid and his mistress a poke in the side for trying to harm his mate and pup. i hate sesshoumaru in this.

i love it update soon