I'm surprised how different faerie world is from ours. Though sometimes I wish our world could be like theirs when it comes to finding jobs, especially since our job market is soo crappy. Also, I'm going to assume that Kagome doesn't lose her powers since she lost her virginity. Is that a correct assumption?
Keep up the good work and update soon :p
First of all!
I love this. In fanfiction, we kind of have some fairly similar plot devices that we recycle in various forms. Your story is extremely original. It kind of brings in a more magical element which RT only brought in when it was convenient for her.
In the first chapters, I liked her flight, it was very suspenseful in a way, and her dreams, very hot.
It's always strange when two people misunderstand each other so completely, and with each of their powers, you can tell it was really hard on both of them. Sesshoumaru was hurt for what happened to him, and what he had to endure, and she was hurt because she felt he betrayed her.
You have a really nice balance of magic, action, and angst going on here.It gives the story an almost alive feeling feeling because in a lot of stories, going into it, or by the 1st, 2nd, 3rd chapter, you can kind of predict at least what genre the author is going to anchor the story in. Your story is a nice mix of several genres that I really like and they way you present them is lovely.
Keep up the good work!
MissK
Thanks for the update, i really enjoy this story!
Things finally looked like they were getting somewhere, and 'BAM' the spiders got Sess! Can't wait to read the next one!!
Oh yay! *Happy dances* They're together again ^.^ I always love it when Sesshoumaru's humbled. Another awesome chapter! *huggles and lubs*
MontiK
Awesome story, can't wait for the next one! Can't wait to find out why Sesshomaru did what he did and i can't believe her mother just gave her location out like that!
Looking forward to the next chapter!!
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