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youkaihime (Chapter 19) - Sat 25 Jul 2009
Haaahaaa I knew that in order for them to end up together, they would both have to be the same species... I didn't think that Sesshoumaru becoming human would be very likely so I suspected that Kagome turning into a vampire was the best bet. Anyways, I love your story so far, not only the plot but also the characterizations of the Inuyasha characters. I'm not typically a fan of OCs, but I love Marzia and I'm glad she's not a Mary Sue character, (I guess I'm glad that none of them are) Keep up the good work ^_^

moosegirl13 (Chapter 19) - Sat 25 Jul 2009
Holy crap, that was an amazing chapter! And well worth the wait, too. This fic keeps on getting better and better. I can't wait to find out what happens next!! SO FREAKIN' EXCITING!! Please, please, please, update soon!

Lilium (Chapter 18) - Wed 22 Jul 2009
NOO!! You left us hanging!!, :D. Update soon!!! I can't wait!(:

jaimesesshy (Chapter 18) - Wed 22 Jul 2009
AAAAH! You need to update again soon! I have to know what's going on. It's killing me!

dah88 (Chapter 18) - Wed 22 Jul 2009
omg! how could u sooo short....but i absolutly love your story. I can't wait to see what happens next! If you can update asap! love ya lots Dannie

KAggie (Chapter 18) - Wed 22 Jul 2009
It's amazing! XD I haven't read this story in ages and I last left off with the whole meeting Marzia chapter. Man I love this story and I'm glad you kept continuing it. I can't wait for the coming chapters! I truly enjoy the portrayal of each character. Lovely, lovely, lovely! :D

Nat-a-wee (Chapter 18) - Wed 22 Jul 2009
I loooveee*cute sing song voice* Of Kyuuketsuki & Dekigokoro!!! it is soo amazing and you are a great writer.. and i will fess up..maybe a tear or two leaked on chapter 18...maybe lol please keep it up! your writing genius!

moosegirl13 (Chapter 18) - Wed 22 Jul 2009
Le gasp, another update! And so quick too!! Though it was a short chapter, it was a nice read. A bittersweet moment between father and daughter. Obviously not the end for poor Kagome, huh? I wonder what will happen next to her (and her forming relationship with Sesshomaru)...? Keep up the amazing work!

moosegirl13 (Chapter 17) - Tue 21 Jul 2009
I love this story to death! Please, update soon.

Dee (Chapter 17) - Mon 20 Jul 2009
"Let's go pway with the cute wittle vampies!" lol classic

Lilium (Chapter 17) - Sun 19 Jul 2009
Your research is out to very good use here. It makes your story so much more interesting and realistic. Love the complexities of the vampire society, and InuYasha- what's his story?!, lol. What more to say, I love it ALL!! Please update soon, this is an amazing story!!

Lilium (Chapter 17) - Sun 19 Jul 2009

jaimesesshy (Chapter 16) - Wed 15 Jul 2009
This chapter is amazing! I love how complicated and layered you are able to make the vampire society. I've been waiting so long for you to update, so I hope that you're able to update again soon!

snowbird (Chapter 15) - Fri 10 Jul 2009
Hooray!!!!! This story is alive once again. I had given up on it. I love a strong Kagome which she is in this story and that's one of the things that attracted me to it.

TheDisasterousChibi (Chapter 1) - Wed 28 May 2008
Hello Lauren, log time no see huh?Its The_Beautifully_Disasterous_Miko from ASS, call me Nathalie and I must say that this is superb I absolutly love it. I had not gotten a chance to read all of your your when you became my beta, though I read some of it and loved it as well. You did such a wonderful job on this story. As stated before the formatting does get a little...distracting and I did miss some parts, but other then that your story for lack of a better phrase "Rox my Sox" lol. *Sigh* I'm going to miss ASS and its a pain in the pattotie to move to another site but as they say all good things must come to an end. I would like if you could, when you fix the formatting problem, that you could e-mail me telling me it's updated and revised. You can contact me at heavymeta;honey3000@yahoo.com Thanks for giving me a great story to read and being such a great beta Chibi-chan Out ;)

snowbird (Chapter 1) - Sat 24 May 2008
Please - when do you plan to transfer the rest of the chapters from ASS to here? I'm anxious for chapter 14 update.

Devious Kitsune (Chapter 1) - Fri 16 May 2008
As to snowbird's comment on the formatting, I think it's the first solid line of "________________" that throws the page/frame/table width off. It doesn't technically cut the words themselves off, they just get hidden because of the website's design. With other fic I sometimes have to increase or decrease the browser font size to have things show up right. And I've gone on far too long, sorry. Glad I'll be able to keep up with your fics here

snowbird (Chapter 3) - Fri 09 May 2008
I'm still trying to adjust to this new site. Did you know that some of the words at the ends of your lines are disappearing? It makes a reader have to guess at what you have typed at the end of the line. You need to get the site to fix this. Also, on ASS you had 13 chapters of this story up. I'm anxious for you to continue from there. Plus, I guess all my previous reviews are now going to be lost from that site. I want to put your story on my fav list, but this site won't let me do that to any of its stories which is frustrating! As one of their writers, please bring this oversite to their attention. I'm still trying to learn my way around this new site. ASS spoiled me. It was very user friendly. I like this story of yours and would very much like to continue enjoying your writing talents.

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