this is starting to get sad. kagome has turnt kinda slutty just willingly giving her body away with no love whatsoever.
great story keep up the great work ^_^
the story is really good. tho its a little rushed in certain places. a little more detail would make your story even better. try it out and see what it does. Update soon, i cant wait to read more ^^
Characters are quite a bit OOC so I would be careful of this. Story moves a bit too fast and I'd watch the detail flow a bit, doesn't quite flow from one moment to the next. But these are easy to fix. :)
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