Nah, we only start cursing if the next update doesn't come for a long time. We're (mostly) patient people. *grins*
You are right. You are so, so evil! Please do not let them rape her... please let Sesshoumaru arrive soon.
Oh, man! She almost made it! I continue to love this story, I am especially enjoying the action/adventure elements that are coming into play.
Damn....so she gets tortured even worse again? Man, poor Kagome, can't catch a break.
No, my sweet girl, you are not evil per se. You merely enjoy the thrill of keeping us on the edge. You have quite the talent for drawing out such an intense and life threatening situation, keeping us on the edge of our seats, cringing with what happens next, and then when life seems to be doomed, in rushes our a savior. Excellent use of such a drama, angst, intrigue. I must say, you had me pushing my feet and wiggling as if this action would help Kagome move faster. Silly, huh? She got caught anyway. I just love the intensity of all of it. Keeps me wanting to know what's next quickly and wishing you had school break so you could put out more chapters just so I wouldn't have these lingering thoughts on what this sick slimeball will do to her next. JEN
... ... ... oh my GOD!
I finally make my way back to Dokuga, eagerly pounce on Wisteria and I get this? You must be my punishment for some evil I did in my last life :P That was so cruel!! You really did that ending well. Call me naive but I didn't expect it at all. When Kagome heard "I'm right here," I gasped in relief only to be devastated. Please, please don't let her be raped. After all her worrying about not having her first time with Sesshoumaru while he knew her as Fugi, I can't stand the thought of her being abused like that. *cries* Have mercy!
Wattle (Chapter 8) - Fri 05 Mar 2010
I just want to say that this is the most beautiful fan-fiction I have read. I am far from reaching the end, but your story is well written and, I don't know how else to explain it. It doesn't bash the characters, it doesn't make me as a reader feel forced to continue reading, it makes me feel quietly happy and calm to read. All I can think of to describe it is that it is perfect. The perfect balance of everything. Thank you so much for writing, and please continue!
Angela (Chapter 44) - Fri 05 Mar 2010
aww man i hope sesshoumaru gets there fast! ^ ^
Anonymous (Chapter 44) - Fri 05 Mar 2010
how horrible! she fries the mantis and barely escapes just to be caught again. where are you sesshoumaru!? i hope he swoops in soon or there won't be any more kagome left to save :( can't wait for the next update!
Rikayu (Chapter 44) - Fri 05 Mar 2010
UWAHHHHH!!!! this is such a thrilling story!! my heart skips a beat whenever i see an update! This chapter was great! It felt like i could see and feel what Kagome was going through! and GAHHHH!!! I somehow knew it wasn't Sesshoumaru, cause that'd be too easy~ I'm glad you decided to not make him show up.. just yet.
I can't wait for more!!!!!
Saide (Chapter 44) - Fri 05 Mar 2010
....oh god...this is...too much...I wont curse you for that, you write with such intensive flair! <3
my heart couldn't take this much. ;A;
Where is Sesshomaru? ;A;
Goose (Chapter 44) - Fri 05 Mar 2010
D': *GASP* NO!! What more can he do to poor Kagome!?! Hopefully we'll find out SOON!!
WTF Miss Teak...she goes through all that to get out the camp only to be caught by Kumano again...where the heck is Sess?
chika1345 (Chapter 2) - Mon 01 Mar 2010
I'm loving this story even more, i'm reading through it and forcing myself to go back and write reviews for each 1 i've read so far because this story is sooooo good and you deserve to have your awesome talent acknowledged cause it rocks!
chika1345 (Chapter 1) - Mon 01 Mar 2010
Ahhhhhhhhhhhh! This is soooo goood!
Xero (Chapter 43) - Mon 01 Mar 2010
Pleeeeaaasssseeeeeee updatee!!!!! PLLLEEAAASSSSEEEEEE *is on knees*
xokaggyfanox (Chapter 43) - Sun 28 Feb 2010
completely forget about this update. definatly won't happen again i'm addicited to this fic. i get so exicted jst to see the chapter on the home page of this site lol.
omg that was so intense i hope kagome makes it out in one piece. but the pit in my stomach feels like something will happen. those little hopeless twists really kill me. i want kagome to do this for herself. i hope she atleast makes it to greenland and out the place she is in. i'm glad her hope is back and i hope she can keep that strength she was just gained. her emotions really do rule her powers
please i cn't wait for the next chapter update soon.
Black light brightness (Chapter 43) - Sat 27 Feb 2010
This is an AWESOME! story ^_^ are you posting it on FanFiction.net? Cant wait for the next chapter! ^_^
Wow. This only took me 5 STRAIGHT hours to read...probably more than that. I have been considering reading this story for some time, but since I had dental surgery earlier today I figured today was a good day to finally read your story.
All I have to say is WOW. Such good writing, such attention to detail...and you are not scared to let the characters experience real pain. As much as I hope it does not happen, I can see her being caught and the crazy bear finishing what he tried to start before she ran into Sesshoumaru...
Looking forward to the next chapter :)
Breezy (Chapter 43) - Sat 27 Feb 2010
This is such a wonderful story. I just started reading today and couldn't stop. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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