The update was awesome! Really loving the development of this fic. Looking forward to more!

Great chapter 

That was cute 

Have I told you yet how much I love that you gave Kaede a boo? <3

Thanks for the chapter. This conversation made me laugh 

I love the universe fhat you built here, very solid and intriguing. The build up is also mouth watering. Looking forward to the next installment!

Update soon!!!

Love love love this piece !?! Pls update like really soon

Love love love this piece !?! Pls update like really soon

This is fun and charming. He's such a self centered jerk in this. I love the take down he gets from Kagome. 

Love the story but realizing it doesn't quite match the summary at all  it's way better read then I thought just from the summary ??

Love the story but realizing it doesn't quite match the summary at all  it's way better read then I thought just from the summary ??

Great story

I enjoy the story a lot. You did want us about the immaturity,

but Kagome is extremely rude and nosy. So I find it very off putting. Like that's her JOB. Not her husband, home or anything of the sort. She goes around making demands and being disrespectful. 

I totally get she wants to help, but there are ways to provide help without overstepping your boundaries. So she's incredibly annoying and I actually don't like her. 

I like Sesshomaru a lot more, it also helps that the story seems to be following him instead of Kagome. We don't know much about her as opposed to Sesshomaru. 

Also, if everyone's life is in danger, I feel like Sesshomaru owes it to the adults to at least explain the situation. 

Can't wait to continue reading. 

23 chapters and no review? That is a scandal! This story definitely deserves more attention. I really like how you build up the arc and your characters. I especially like how you characterize Rin as a precocious wise and intuitive child.