Mochi part was hilarious and I immediately picture his faced when he told her his sweet preference. haha and of course it was very sweet how he used his salvia to heal her wounds. Adorbs

Hope you update soon

Hillarious ending to this chapter :)))

Hmmm its all progressively well written however i dislike this version of ooc seeshoumaru slightly and his tolerance of kagome so readily. Kagome  says a lot of 'i guess'. I cannot imagine him knowing his fav color or number... 

I think this fic needs work on character potrayal a bit.

Please keep writting!

This is well written. I like it ! Why are there no reviews to this fic ?!?