A show of indignation is the only viable line of defence execution wise for women no matter how ineffective it is in yielding the desired results.
Why is kagome's anger not self-directed already ? he wouldnt be able to exploit her so efficiently if there werent some weakness present in her to begin with. You simply cannot wage war without acknowledging your shortcomings first so they can be compensated/accounted for by other means.
Bluntly speaking, Kagome spends too much time blaming others rather than acknowledging her streak for recklessness.
I want Sesshomaru's feathers to be ruffled already. The one-sided effective barb targetting is getting old. Bite the dog where he atleast looses some of his cool please.
Kathy (Chapter 24) - Sat 03 Sep 2022
Um.. what
UGGH!! I love that you're drawing out the scene via their emotions - "not a chore", I thiiiink I may have an idea what he's hinting at but I can't wait to read more XD
witty (Chapter 24) - Thu 01 Sep 2022
Let me guess...It was a chore whenever Inuyasha asked :P Now how would Sesshomaru know that unless he frequently watched Kagome and Inu have sex.
Also, what dignity? Kagome. Be serious.
ink142 (Chapter 24) - Thu 01 Sep 2022
"Not a chore for you"... I too am also puzzling over this remark! Also slightly apprehensive about what comes next now that Kagome is leaving the love nest haha... looking forward to seeing where you go next!
ink142 (Chapter 23) - Thu 01 Sep 2022
Truthfully I have never thought about Sesshoumaru's toes, or bare feet for that matter: your description was too cute and just how I would expect them to be! Thank you for posting another chapter :)
witty (Chapter 23) - Wed 31 Aug 2022
Sesshomaru licked her clean? Oh my.
Kagome is truly insufferable!! Sesshomaru is giving her everything she's ever wanted but denied herself. Her "whorish" thoughts are her real desires that Inuyasha couldn't fulfill. I'm guessing a part of her 'growth' will be her actually participating in one of these romps instead of acting like she's being forced.
Oh boy! She fell in love with Sesshomaru. And she's married to another man... This is gonna be hard for Kagome, Sesshomaru and Inuyasha.
Kathy (Chapter 22) - Tue 23 Aug 2022
Did she just pass out or did he choke her to that pt?
witty (Chapter 22) - Mon 22 Aug 2022
Yes, Kagome. What's happened between the two of you was inevitable but in a way she started this madness and Sesshomaru finished it.
The similarities between her and Kikyo are still there. "Just a woman..." Kikyo wanted to be an ordinary woman too.
Amai (Chapter 21) - Fri 19 Aug 2022
Ok.
First she decides her childless state is the reason her marriage is screwed up. No doubt she has been taunted by inuyasha for not bearing one in a roundabout or blunt manner. As if a child fixes spousal compatibility problems right ?
Second she decides to solve a marital issue by asking her half brother in law who her husband quite strongly detests to help her out with baby making thinking it'll be ok to lie to her husband and raise the child in that manner.
Third she actually goes through with the plan. (No fear here or maybe there was and i missed it)
Fourth she continues the deed even after her pregnancy is confirmed and all the self loathing has manifested even in this ultimate desire culmination or exorcism. Bitch cant decide whether she wants to come or bwarf in her fear of discovering the horny side.
This kagome is an idiota and the only understandable emotion felt by her is the fear element.
Fear dictates everything for THE time travelling shikon miko and i fail to see how Seeshomaru would be attracted to such a wretched creature unless he is as convoluted as her in the head.
In response to your AN: I'd be surprised if it was anything but :)
Also, great update.
Kaylah (Chapter 21) - Thu 18 Aug 2022
It's pretty clear that he is in love with her. He's trying to show her that she could have so much more than what Inuyasha has to offer. Not just sexually either.
ink142 (Chapter 21) - Wed 17 Aug 2022
"Author's note: For the sake of 100% transparency, this is a smutty, angsty, slow-burn fic. Emphasis on the ANGST. Emphasis on the SLOW-BURN. Double-emphasis on the SMUT."
Haha it's like you're writing the perfect story. Thank you for keeping this one going! Can't wait to see how this one plays out.
Kathy (Chapter 21) - Wed 17 Aug 2022
This is a great story.
Wah (Chapter 20) - Tue 16 Aug 2022
Ok now it feels like nothing is happening..too many chapters exactly like this...no story progression between sess/kag
Ya know... your Sesshomaru's tend to think vastly different than most others. Can't quite tell where you'll go from here with it, yet, but should he be anything like Control's Sesshomaru, I shouldn't be surprised in the slightest lol.
REDWOLF (Chapter 20) - Mon 15 Aug 2022
I think Kagome may be bi-polar, at least a little. Or whatever has caused her to stray in her marriage has made her a little nuts. She definitely needs a psychiatrist. I really don't feel sorry for her as much as I do Sesshoumaru. Not sure if it was him loving her from the beginning or just another way to aggravate Inuyasha. I just wonder why she strayed and if she realizes the problems Inuyasha is going to have. Great chapter.
Kathy (Chapter 20) - Mon 15 Aug 2022
Can Kagome stop playing around and just stay with that sexy man
Man... this was deliciously savage. And quite inevitable. Sure, it sucks for Inuyasha but let's be real here: he isn't right for her and seeks to control. He can't help it, right? It's nature and nurture, of which he's really only in tune with one. I wanna make predictions but I won't, because I want to see how this plays out in your mind. Though I've said before (in a Control review) - I think your mind is a scary place lol! For real, though... it makes for great reading material.
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