Absolutely delicious... I must say, when there's a lemon in a oneshot it's sometimes hard to get into the characters and FEEL something. It can end up seeming like meaningless porn. Not here. You did it masterfully. I was fully emersed into this world you created, in their lives as written. The heart and emotions behind their actions. Wonderful job. Truly. It''s a rare and wonderful find.
Absolutely delicious...
It's better when it's angry. ;P
Love your style of writing.
I love reading the story over and over. Even though it is complete, I can very much see this story continuing or having a part two. Even the talk of a conversation in the morning seems like it could be a cliff hanger.
i never thought you did lemons, but i'm glad i was wrong. this was a very good one shot. the lemon was done in a way that had me thinking it was part of a romance novel scene. i've read other one shots you've written and they didn't have any lemons. non lemons are good, but ones with lemons/limes are the best to read. the plot was different and i liked it.seeing Maru admit his feelings for Kags is always a joy to read. Maru/Kags pairings are my favorite to read and i hope you keep up the great writing that you do. c'ya'
I loved this and would totally love a fix based on these two chefs
Bravo! Loved it! That was Fire!! Lol
Oh damn. I love the hints of otherness!
Love it!!! This needs a sequel pretty please T_T
Good story. I wish you made it into chapter s
That was a sweet ass story loved it... This was one hell of a one-shot got more?
Wow, this chapter was HOT! And Sesshomaru pretending to be a pescatarian to hide the fact that he prefers raw meat was a good idea - who ever heard of a demon who refuses to eat meat? I already love this story, please write more soon!
ahh, one- scratch that- two of my fav tropes, and so wonderfully written!!
they try so hard to hate each other, but it dont take much to bust down those walls, do it?? lol
pristine sess and dirty bomb kags, *coming* together and fitting so perfectly! i wish a hotel would eff up like that for me.
the passion was real, and you just make them play so well of each other XD Loved it.
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