Reviews for Discarded Wings by Neutron

Renee Mannings (Chapter 7) - Sat 13 Aug 2022

This inspired me to watch City of Angels. Loved it 


aries_heart (Chapter 7) - Tue 07 Jun 2022

 This was just the sweetest story ever. 

 

Had me beating my chestt. i loved it so much 


Young Kagome (Chapter 7) - Sat 14 May 2022

If this wasn't the cutest story ever!!! Thank you I loved it! 


Jyurian (Chapter 7) - Wed 11 May 2022

I was so immediately caught up in this that I didn't review until I'd read it all, but I suppose that works since this is completed.

 

This is one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read, fanfiction or otherwise. It reads like a fairytale with that somewhat "detached" narration in parts (not the best way to describe it), while also being so incredibly emotionally-charged throughout. I cried while reading the first and last chapters, for two totally different reasons, and I think that expresses the impact best.


Lady T (Chapter 7) - Sat 23 Apr 2022

Omg I loved this story. It was so beautiful. Thank you for sharing. Love to read more of your work.


Lady T (Chapter 1) - Sat 23 Apr 2022

OMG boo, you started this one strong. I'm already crying!!!! Can't wait to read the next chapter!


Redleopord (Chapter 2) - Tue 19 Oct 2021

Great chapter! I knew this was gonna be good.


zodiak023 (Chapter 2) - Tue 19 Oct 2021

Wow I'm really interested into seeing this plot play out, really good, I'm on the edge of my seat!?!


TekoloKuautli (Chapter 2) - Tue 19 Oct 2021

Woohoo! He revealed himself so soon, but then again these new feelings had to be sudden for a timeless being. And I'm not complaining, having him watch over her shoulder her life would not be bad, but more interactions are also better. I'm mostly surprised that he hasn't lost his wings yet, as he mentioned he broke so many rules already, speaking to a human directly was the greatest but not the last.

I hope that Heaven at least gives him some legal paperwork when they finally let him stay for good, but it would be hilarious for Kagome to try to contact some government higher up that could make him an identity or a forgery.

This kind of innocent Sesshomaru is so intriguing and cute, he felt curiosity and now the beginnings of love. What other emotions is he going to feel next?


SmilingFool (Chapter 2) - Tue 19 Oct 2021

Oh what a wonderful chapter loved it.  Can't wait to see how this develops.


TekoloKuautli (Chapter 1) - Mon 18 Oct 2021

That was a beautiful story, is this going to continue? It was really touching.

I hope he gets to know her better before he discards his wings. Maybe she's a previous angel that also discarded her wings in another life? That would explain her sensitivity to his presence.


Redleopord (Chapter 1) - Tue 21 Sep 2021

Wow! This reminds me so much of City of Angels. I can't wait to see how Sess and Kagome s' version unfolds. Nice job! I'll be looking for you.


Neelixonee (Chapter 1) - Sat 18 Sep 2021

I'm looking forward to seeing this unfold.  What a mystery.  Poor Rin. 


InuLuna of The Moon (Chapter 1) - Sat 18 Sep 2021

Oh my goodness,

Beautifully written and a tear jerker.

Thank you! I hope you will write more ?


WiccanMethuselah (Chapter 1) - Thu 16 Sep 2021

This is an excellent, if incredibly poignant, start to a story of this genre. Very well written, without too much pulling on the heartstrings, but just the right amount. Thank you so much for posting it here!


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