This story looks really promising. A lot of fanfics that are well-written are overly elaborate, and not much happens. This story seems to be both well-written and eventful, and the writing style is not overly ornate. There is just enough detail to develop characters and make it so the reader can picture the scene. I get excited when I come across a new multi-chapter fic that might become one of the big, awesome fanfics, and it appears that this might be one of them.
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