Wow!! Really gory. Excited and fear building up for next chapter
There aren't enough words to say how wrapped up I'm getting in this. It's subtle, but you can nearly feel the desperation he's going through to get her back. The biggest thing though is if it works, will she retain her memories? Her appearance? I feel like she's going to be conflicted over the whole thing too if she does remember, because on the one hand he's taken considerable measures to ensure she returns, but on the other hand it's the loss of life that may be the downfall in all of this (On her end). I'm stoked to see how this plays out! It gives me all the tingles!
Those last two lines make me shiver in the most delightful of ways. I'm so excited to see how this goes!
Well damn! Here we go!
Though I wonder how or why did Kagome die?
Mynameishuman (Chapter 3) - Fri 05 Mar 2021
Damn. Good chapter.
Wow! This chapter is dark and really creepy. I can't wait to see what happens. Is she going to be born again? Is she going to be a baby? Will she want to come back?
Mynameishuman (Chapter 2) - Thu 04 Mar 2021
Intrigued! Watching for more.
Ooooh this is gonna be dark af. Let's see where this goes!
Ahh so he plans to bring Kagome back to life using a prego's baby.. That's a good route. Hope it works.
Great start! I'm excited to see where it goes.
Just take my soul why don't you? I already feel it. This is gonna have me so wrapped up that I'm a writhing mess of emotion and impatience.
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