Yep, an idiot. But he's too late!
I liked Desires Unmentioned very much but I prefer this story, it's so good. Every time you change course or take us somewhere else I re-read the last chapters and they always flow together smoothly. I just wanted to tell you.
There's something that's been bothering me since the beginning, I've been waiting for the plot to come back to Edo, and maybe you have it planned as well, but... Aren't they worried about Shippo's disappearance? Kagome asked Miroku to take him to the Kitsune School, to take care of him, but Shippo went away with Kagome. Sorry if I spoiled something!
Great chapter.
Good chapter.
BlackInu (Chapter 98) - Thu 23 Sep 2021
Kikyou's death must have happened after Naraku's demise and during Kagome 's pregnancy, mustn't it? While Kagome was in the South. I'm not sure if the story needs it, I' m OK with both options. Up to you, really.
Thanks for the chapters. I love this story and it's always good news when you post more than one chapter or update often.
Anonymous (Chapter 98) - Thu 23 Sep 2021
Once again poor kagome. You can bet his selfish ass will cause problems. Too little too late always the same thing
Great chapter. Having a Kikyo dying scene might help further explain Inuyasha's feelings for Kagome. It makes me wonder why Kagome will be better off with Sesshomaru than Inuyasha despite the circumstances she is with Sesshomaru now.
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