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susie (Chapter 2) - Tue 06 Oct 2020

i really like this fic.  its a great idea, and i love the way you write.  im not usually into them sharing for too long, but im cool with inuyasha, and i like how you are doing it - unraveling it piece by piece so the reader finds out slowly.  i also like how she and inu aren't even together yet and nobody is really into it yet lol.  she'll  win em over.  i also like how kagome has all the knowlege and power and confidence, and there really isn't anything sess can do about it.  im gonna like watching their closeness grow in our timeline, but also piece by piece in the flashbacks too.

great work.  please update soon!


zodiak023 (Chapter 1) - Fri 02 Oct 2020

I soooooo cant wait to see where this plot goes, an interesting start. Hope to read more very soon


bookgirl813 (Chapter 1) - Tue 29 Sep 2020

Love this.  Really looking forward to seeing where this goes. 


bernadine (Chapter 1) - Mon 28 Sep 2020

WOW, this story is pretty interesting....  cant wait for the next chapters :) 

 


Nicole (Chapter 1) - Mon 28 Sep 2020

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! I love this so much!!! Holy bajeezus, what a ride! T.T you had me so emotional and so invested in the story. I told myself I wasn't going to read any more unfinished works right now (I'm so impatient for updates) but OMG I'm so glad I read this!! You write beautifully; Sesshomaru's reaction was just *chefs kiss*. I really enjoy when Sesshomaru is written so closely to the OC. The emotion from Kagome and the unique fighting abilities you included were so breathtaking. Seriously. Please write this forever. My brain doesn't even know where to go right now because it's spazzing out about all the parts I loved. Shippou's line, while short, I could hear in my head. Even Inuyasha's reactions were hilariously on par with his character. 

 

I will be anxiously awaiting your next chapter so I can fan girl all over again lol.


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