OMG sneaking kisses I bet if the fireplace did not moan they would have done more than kiss.... I believe the fireplace would open only when the queen found her king can't wait to see what happens... Love it.
Wow an update, I'm so happy so very happy.... Ok enough of my weirdness. Loved the chapter, I like the idea of Sesshomaru being close to Kagome. Wonder what Inu Yasha would do if he knew they were half brothers or is it not in this story hard to remember that far back. I really love this story some hot steamy nights should be heading Kagome's way.... LOL Wonder when they will find that Inu Yasha is giving Naraku the details of war... Update when you can still a big fan....
Wow that was a great chapter.... Loved it. I can't believe they finally kissed oh boy.... Wonder what Kagome will do now that she knows about Inu Yasha taking his sex life out of the castle? She needs to divorce him and marry Sesshomaru. Gosh can't wait to read more... So this is the second air raid wonder if Kagura is working for Naraku? If so she's weakening his mind somehow... Gods so much everything to keep you reading.... Update soon
Jennn (Chapter 7) - Mon 20 Jul 2020
Yaaay!! I loved this chapter! I can't wait to keep reading
Niomi (Chapter 6) - Thu 02 Jul 2020
You are just as good at writing action and building drama as character development! This story is becoming more well rounded! I wonder what this new connection between them will bring!! I must say, the setting of this story kind of reminds me of Striking A Deal With The Devil by Smortz, one of my fav stories! Ok, it's totally different but there aren't a lot of stories and writers brave enough to venture off into a different setting and time!! And do it so well. Love it.
Niomi (Chapter 5) - Wed 01 Jul 2020
Ah! thank you for another incredible update. You really don't spare no details! I love it! This renewed interest that Inuyasha seems to have in Kagome is exciting! I wonder what's going to happen. He surely doesn't think he has a chance, let alone can lay a finger on her again! I love this determined, yet... hm.. elegant Kagome you created. Shes definitely earning her respect! Look forward to more relationship building
Niomi (Chapter 4) - Fri 26 Jun 2020
I love the dialect of this setting. Although your story is a huge stray from the original world, it is definitely intriguing and well written. Everything is different, unique, except the spark of Kagome and Sesshomaru's characters. You're doing a great job merging their qualities into this world. I was a little taken back from the frequent timeline changes but it was not hard to follow. I feel like I'm watching a show, actually. The first chapter may have moved too fast, but I guess it was needed to introduce the setting. Looking forward to more! Seems like their relationship is taking off on the right path ;) Boy, does Kagome have a lot on her shoulders. I love how strong she is, gotta appreciate a women who can separate her emotions from her responsibilities. Inuyasha is a little BOY, so under deserving of being by her side. I hope Kagome continues to prove her strength! Thanks for the update
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