I'm so excited to see how this all ends, and whats going to happen. I feel like I know what is going on happen to set sesshoumaru off and transform back, but I don't want to jinx it! Ugg sooo can't wait! Please update RIGHT AWAY!
Man, this story went from light/to sexually frustrating/romantic/soul crushing and everything in between. I don't know how to even process it but I'm interested in seeing how you bring this all home. Also, I still haven't forgotten about the fact that these two never officially had full blown intercourse yet. Though I won't lie, it really irked me how Kagome kept trying even as she saw him emotionally distraught. I think she actually might be the least developed character in the story with how she mentally and emotionally behaves/backpeddles.
Bit, I am hoping that she can be absolved of all this blame, as if her wish was secretly a blessing for Sesshomaru against these magic crazed demons and the war brewing against the West. Cause she's just been taking blow after blow and not in the fun way.
Epic Epic chapter! Alot of corners turned.Glad its not what we thought with Rin. She let Sess have it didn't she? Love Kagome's cougar momma.LMAO! Impressive. I could never jump down that high. Eagerly awaiting more. Well done.
Mecca (Chapter 32) - Wed 14 Oct 2020
Holy shit, Morally Reprehensible Kagome indeed! But she's prioritizing her promise above a lot of things, of course she's going to have to do some naughty things in the name of love. So glad Rin wasn't actually raped and preggers, at least that half of her misdeeds is wiped clean. I'm so looking forward to how Sess will become demon again - which he's got to be. And maybe it won't be Kagome's fault? Or she will sacrifice herself in order for him to return to demon status? 11/30 is my birthday so I would LOVE the ending to this epic tale for my birthday present! :) Awesome chapter and thanks for all the feels!
Marie (Chapter 32) - Wed 14 Oct 2020
I'm glad this chapter wasn't real dark I can handle a lil but man you had me worried. I was like awash and lags never gonna get together now
Lmaooo her mom had it the whole time! That's hilarious. I feel bad she had to burn multiple bridges but when you're desperate you'll do anything. I wish she was honest with Hojo. She doesn't learn does she? I'm sooooooo HAPPY about Rin!!! Omg that was the best part of this whole story. The relief! She's super ok! I can't believe this beautiful story is almost over I could cry. I love it so much. Please update soon!!
Anonymous (Chapter 31) - Fri 09 Oct 2020
I know I'm.latr, but Happy Birthday!! And I'll.write you in when I vote.
Great chapter as always. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Miss C (Chapter 31) - Fri 02 Oct 2020
This was a tough revealing chapter.
Betsy (Chapter 31) - Wed 30 Sep 2020
Happy Birthday!!!!!! May this year bring many blessings, opportunites, health, peace, and lots of creativity!
I cried. Why Rin? I expected it but it hurt so much, poor baby.
You're a great writer, don't mind me. I'm hurt but as you said in you A/N, healing is good.
Mecca (Chapter 31) - Wed 30 Sep 2020
Happiest of birthdays, dear Susie! I vote you for president haha! You'd probably do a better job ;) Okay, so... wow. This chapter. What do you have up your sleeve to redeem yourself with hurting us so?? Oh my gosh, all the angst, oh but it felt so good in a way because I'm hoping for a good outcome! And Kagome, poor, sweet, stupid Kagome! She really has become quite pathetic, but I'm hoping she will redeem herself somehow for hurting Sesshoumaru so much. Like wow. Royally and totally screwed the pooch back there. And poor Rin! Not sure how Kagome can ever do right by those two ever again. I love how this dynamic is so freah though, the plot is so good. Thank you for laboring over this story, and hope the best for our characters. A fleeting thought occurred to me - what if it wasn't really Kagome's fault? Eh but can't speculate too hard. Does this mean the romance is over? The fact that Kagome would even think of Sesshoumaru forgiving her any time soon shows just how naive she is. I don't think I could forgive something like that.
Again, Happy Birthday!! I hope you had amazing day!
Mel (Chapter 31) - Wed 30 Sep 2020
You destroyed me....
Nicole (Chapter 31) - Wed 30 Sep 2020
Whelp. This chapter ruined my life. T.T *sobs* ok, not really, but kind of. Kind of felt like my whole soul was being wrenched out for a while. Kind of feels like there is no hope in the universe. Kind of feels like misery. *inconsolable crying* my whole soul!!! Please update soon. I can't handle this sort of agony!! Poor Rin!! Poor Sesshomaru!! Damn Kagome!!
You hurt me so good! This was my worst fear for Rin!! Poor baby. She sounds a bit too much like Kagomes I can't even picture her talking back to Sesshomaru lol. Why does it feel like you're going to end it soon and continue on in another story?? That's the kind of finality type vibes I'm getting. Kagome sooo deserves this and I feel so bad for her! They made such progress. At least he's not completely dissing her but I don't see a way up. I'm sure you'll find a way. HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!! Still so young too! Thanks for thinking of us on your special day. I hope you enjoyed it the best you could.
Mo (Chapter 31) - Wed 30 Sep 2020
I'm hoping Kagome can undo her wish and reset time. The revelation of what happened to Rin is so hard to bear. And hopefully with the knowledge of what will be she can be there to help protect Rin and prevent her from this doom.
WAH!!! Poor Sesshy. Poor Kags! Poor, poor Rin!!! But, yeah, HAPPY BIRTHDAY anyway. (I'm not quite twice your age, but almost!) Still... poor peoples whose hearts are all hurty. :( My rational mind knows that this was an extremely realistic chapter and that most people would react in similar ways in these circumstances - but it didn't make it any easier to read. *sigh* I hope things go better for all concerned going forward, but I'm too grounded in reality to think that's possible. Then again, I've been known to be horribly awful at predicting what authoress people are going to do to their characters and, by proxy, to their readers! Please, though, remember I've been having a tough few months and be a little nice, 'k? :D Thanks you!!
<3
~~Wiccan~~
I'm so proud of Kagome for getting it all out; not holding back with telling her truths and facing the mess she made. "I'm not fond you at the moment" is my favorite quote because I've used that myself so many times. I can't help but think about race with this story...there is so many misconceptions about how humans are and how demons are that Sesshomaru and Kagome both seem to miss the point that their species shouldn't define who they are. Their prejudices seem to be more of problem than something that is helpful. However, Sesshomaru seems to catch on faster than Kagome, which I find to be funny. I think the part about sunsets and unity, though simple, is really deep. There was a lot going on in this chapter that I think alludes to some important points in further chapters. A great takeaway from this that I got is no matter how hurt you are you have to talk through your funk with your partner (could be any type of relationship) if you are going to get through to the other side. I hope you are having a wonderful Happy Birthday :)
Kamira29 (Chapter 31) - Tue 29 Sep 2020
you went straight to the gut feelings and then the heart, then you twisted both knives reaaaaalllly hard and pulled. You killed me with this chapter.
Anne (Chapter 31) - Tue 29 Sep 2020
Happy birthday! Thank you for sharing this perfect story of yours with us. I look forward to reading each chapter the moment it posts! As with this chapter, I was expecting the hurt and emotions, but I look forward to the next chapter to see how Kagome can eat crow for this. Ugh, her telling her secret was a long time coming. Didn't want it to happen, but it had to. Looking forward to your next post!!
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