Reviews for Immortals by Dani

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Mecca (Chapter 9) - Tue 17 Jan 2023

So I'm really actually liking this whole Pining Sess theme you have with this story, as well as The Tea House (which are the only ones of yours I've read) and I gotta say I like it. Pining Sess is pretty much my fav. Also Clueless Kagome isn't bad either lol I'm loving this story! 


Amai (Chapter 15) - Sun 15 Jan 2023

Ive read this before and reading it again is as good as reading it the first time. Excellentoo


Janie (Chapter 15) - Tue 20 Oct 2020

So I ugly cried and I don't even really like Inuyasha. The way you described him gasping for breath honestly killed me and I could feel just a fraction of what Kagome was feeling. I was utterly wrecked and I had to take a break and watch some happy videos to help soothe me again!

 

That being said, I just loved this story so much. Time passing and how Kagome coped with seeing literally everyone she knew and loved, succumb to time. I just ugh. Sesshoumaru will always be my main squeeze no matter which fandom I jump into and your portrayal of him was great so thank you for reintroducing Sesshoumaru to me and helping me rediscover my love of him and writing him.

 

Your writing was great so thank you for sharing this with us all!

 

Ta-Ta for now,

 

Janie


Sayuri (Chapter 15) - Sun 04 Oct 2020

I'm crying. This is such a beautiful story!!! I think I read it years ago, but I'm not sure. Man I love every bit of it! 


Lee (Chapter 15) - Thu 28 May 2020

A beautiful story! Thank you for sharing. 


Loveyaa (Chapter 15) - Thu 16 Jan 2020

What a life! What a life they've lived. Lovely story. I think I would have liked to see how their kid turns out, but an enjoyable story anyway. I liked how you had Kagome meet Souta at the end. Nice touch.


Anonymous (Chapter 15) - Wed 08 Jan 2020

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DawningPrecipice (Chapter 15) - Wed 08 Jan 2020

Beautiful! I loved this story to the very end. Very well written with a believable and interesting plot line. Thank you so much for your hard work and for sharing it with others. ( ??? )?


DawningPrecipice (Chapter 11) - Wed 08 Jan 2020

I know I said it before, but I really do love this story pace.


DawningPrecipice (Chapter 10) - Wed 08 Jan 2020

Excellent. I love seeing this story grow!


Anonymous (Chapter 9) - Wed 08 Jan 2020

Sixty years seems a little excessive... Six years sounds more about right :-/. A healthy male and female can't ignore each other for so long.


DawningPrecipice (Chapter 8) - Wed 08 Jan 2020

Very good chapter. I'm enjoying this story's pace so far.


DawningPrecipice (Chapter 6) - Wed 08 Jan 2020

Tragic! The chapter killed me several times over... Loving it


DawningPrecipice (Chapter 5) - Wed 08 Jan 2020

This story is nice so far. I'd like to see where it goes :) FYI this chapter is labeled chapter 6 when it should be 5.


Nicki (Chapter 15) - Thu 14 Nov 2019

Wow!!! I love this story!!! Please please please do a sequel!!


RebaJean (Chapter 15) - Fri 08 Nov 2019

Enjoyed this story very much. The sedate pace at which Sesshoumaru pursued Kagame was a nice touch. I like the fact you gave her time to deal with her losses. I can totally see the jealous Shippo and the crossover element was great.


kaoruhana (Chapter 15) - Thu 07 Nov 2019

I truly enjoyed reading this story from start to end.  I liked how you portrayed Kagome and Sesshomaru throughout the course of the story, especially highlighting Kagome's pain at having to live while the others around her are dying.  And I absolutely loved the Boshin War sequence.  At one point, I remember thinking "No way, she wouldn't make Shippo into him would she?"  And then you went and did it wonderfully.  

I spent the better part of my morning enjoying this story and look forward to reading more of your work!  


zodiak023 (Chapter 15) - Thu 07 Nov 2019

It's too short what happens to their baby ? Arg really beautiful story wish it was longer


Kreve (Chapter 1) - Thu 07 Nov 2019

its soooooo Good ! Thank you for sharing!


Mecca (Chapter 16) - Thu 07 Nov 2019

This story is amazing! I thought at first how it would be just another story about Kahome turned immortal, but it is so much more than that. I love how it went at a pace that immortals would truly go, as I would imagine it going. Having the luxury of time to wait for years to do any one thing, to develop relationships that fit the characters perfectly. There are some weird chapter repeats, but the story is a solid and sound one. I would've liked to have seen them build a family or catch up to Kagome's time, but this was still a beautiful ending, I'd even just a bit abrupt. Maybe an epilogue is on the horizon? There is a chapter 16 but it is empty. Thank you for sharing!


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