I love how he can be more open with her. Their "pillow talk" was one of the better parts.
Love where you’re going with this! Lol Sess is DETERMINED to get them all to come to the West. And Kagome! Is it love? Is FWB? Who can say! Also, I liked how you told the relationship between Sess and Touga. Maybe he wasn’t such a great father, etc. That was a refreshing, albeit sad for Sess, take on their relationship. Keep up the great work!
Obviously the naughty parts are fun , but this chapter had a bunch of fun "clean" parts as well The seed talk was good, and the bath talks were fun. Or maybe I'm just a voyeur ..
Keep up the good work!
I really love their interactions
Ceysna (Chapter 10) - Tue 01 Oct 2019
*happy Squee* an update!
Toni (Chapter 10) - Tue 01 Oct 2019
enjoying this more and more with each chapter
keep up the great work can't wait for the next chapter
Ceysna (Chapter 9) - Mon 30 Sep 2019
I can't read it fast enough! Love your work!
Nilee1 (Chapter 9) - Mon 30 Sep 2019
Great chapter! You really did a wonderful job with characterization. Kagome’s comparison of The jewel and Sesshomaru really “hit it out the park” :-)
oh wow lol I wasnt expecting that last bit to ever come from Sessh, great chapter keep it up! :)
Shanika (Chapter 9) - Sun 29 Sep 2019
I'm excited too.... I'm glad that they are beginning to have done type of feeling for each other
Happy happy birthday Susie!!! :D And really, two servings of lemon for us? You're too kind! Lol that was so fun and playful (and beyond yummy). ;D
Jess (Chapter 9) - Sun 29 Sep 2019
You are the best. Keep on coming back to see if there is a new chapter
Darn it, stop teasing about the future chapters! You're the worst :p Even with how frequent you update it's not enough.
And my husband and I have the same father issues. It's a hard one to answer...a father who dies while you're young , or who is alive but may as well not be? I find myself wondering if my husband's father would be happy with our little family meanwhile my father can't really be bothered to respond to a hello. Both are hard in different ways. But the experience helps us to become better parents, to have different perspectives on things. You need all sides to make it work. Even if sesshomaru doesn't take the advice from his human advisors (or whatever they are considered), he will be wiser for having listened to it.
That all made more sense in my head . Anyway happy birthday! You're awesome don't change. The end. ????
Just writing to encourage and praise! Your writing is wonderful , and I'm eager to read more. So many questions! Does she ever tell him about her time? When does she move to the west? Is there racism (specism?) from the castle inhabitants towards the humans? How does the meeting go with other lords? Ugh, your writing is so good, I find myself wanting to know how you see these things panning out. Good job, and then you
I hope you continue! I really enjoy reading
Nilee1 (Chapter 5) - Thu 26 Sep 2019
I love this story. Sesshomaru is so Sesshomaru :-)
I‘m really enjoying this fic so far. You have a good chemistry between Sess and Kagome; their dialogue is very cute. IMO, the western-style wedding is a little jarring, but otherwise I like where this story is headed. Keep up the great work!
I really like this its great
This is very interesting and well written. Can't wait for the next chapter!
I'm loving the witty humor and how laid back this is so far. Can't wait to see what trouble is brewing in the west that could pull Sess away from Kags.
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