It's been a long time since I reviewed any stories and I just had to say my piece on this one.
I love it so far and I love how you are building the relationship between Sesshomaru and Kagome. Is this a demon-human story?
I also love Sesshomaru's coy and playfullness with Kagome and she being pretty much skitish and a bit sassy herself. It seems like her main hang up would be 'what would the rest of the family think of her having other feelings for him instead of just a sister/brother thing.'
My favorite kind of genre with these two are the semi-serious romantic comedy type.
They are just so right for each other. I wish someone would make a good live action movie of these two and the rest of the characters just for us adults. The author and screenplay would have to take these seriously and not try to make into a mockery.
Anyway, I love your writing skills and looking forward to more chapters. Are you planning on making this story a long or short one?
Keep up it coming and as often as you can. :)
Excellent job!!!
This is fun! Cat and mouse games are always fun!
Toni (Chapter 1) - Thu 08 Aug 2019
This is a cute story. Interesting dynamic . Cant wait yo see how you progress the story.
So cute! I'm really enjoying the way you're playing with Kagome. She's brave one minute and a scaredy cat the next, and somehow she just can't stop thinking about those suggestions... I love it! I really look forward to seeing where you take this!
Kousei
Miss C (Chapter 1) - Mon 29 Jul 2019
This is sooo good. I like this a lot.
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