Boy is Sara in for a rude awakening... How is it that she has any followers within the Shiro at this point? She's been miserable and venomous and really needs to be taken down a peg. 

I'm glad that Musashi took Kagome's rejection in stride instead of putting her out for not developing romantic feelings.

This story is going really well, but your jumps are making it so we miss some of the day to day that Sesshomaru goes through. It'd be nice to see this mistreatment that he speaks of or some of the other details we are skipping over. It feels like this is more of a push to get Kagome and Sesshomaru back together, but is the mark the only driving factor? 

LOL I think Kagome was in denial about her pregnancy. What valley is this that she's been searching for anyway? 

Wait... Is this the same Musashi that was a famed samurai who had a province named after him?

I wonder if the of the Inu-tachi will make an appearance? Demons don't seem to be very well known outside of Sesshomaru’s lands, but Inuyasha also doesn't seem to exist in this timeline. Are Kagome and Sesshomaru and Toga the only canon characters in this story? 

I understand that Sesshomaru doesn't like his wife, but he really didn't need to treat her so horribly...  Uncaring and mistreatment are two different things. Hoping he leaves her be from now on. 

Interesting story so far. I wonder if Kagome will discover herself to be pregnant and what she'll do if/when that revelation occurs 

 Applause! Applause! Applause! Great work! Just loved it!

I literally could not put this down. I was even late to class.  You made every character yours with beautiful detail, and made me care. I adored there first night it was descriptive and you didnt make it all about one character or the other. 

What an awesome story so far! I can’t wait to read more! 

really love this story thank you.

What a cute story. It immediately grabbed my attention and pulled me in. I really enjoyed reading it. Great job!

I have read your story without stopping for a moment. I liked it a lot. Thank you, and continue writing.

Wow! This is one of the best story that I have read in a long while! What a treat! Please continue writing, you are a wonderful author!

this was marvelous! i loved every second of it <3 honestly i'm sad to have finished, i enjoyed being in the story so much, but it had a nice happy end and that's always something to be satisfied for ^-^ 

truly, thank you for your wonderful fic!

This was such a sweet story, I loved it. Thank you for creating this world, it was written Well and I loved every second of it. I loved how you portrayed Sesshomaru and Kagome. I would love to read an epilogue or even a sequel. I hope to read another one of your stories some day!

- CR

Wonderfully written.  Thank you for  sharing your beautiful work . Maru is so adorable.  Would have loved a steaming short chapter in the end for dessert...  ;¬*

Just finished reading this story and I loved it! it was so well written, and I loved the characterization of everyone. Maru was super adorable. I’m glad that he and Genkei grew to have a good relationship. I know the story is complete, but if you do decide to add more, I will read it in a heartbeat!

three words " I love it"

it has splashes of everything while still staying compact and tying it off with a Happy ending 

was the cherry on top. All i gotta really say is thanks for sharing

I loved this. It was short and has potential to have more added and even a sequel. Over all it was a good read and I'm hoping to see more.

I thoroughly enjoyed your story. This is literally one of the sweetest and most well written stories I have read in a long time. Overall quality of this story is excellent. The character development and flow of the story was EXCELLENT!! Please continue to write more stories. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.

This was such a sweet and wonderful story! Thank you for taking the time to share it.