A sweet, invigorating tale. I can't wait to read more!
Wonderful story and I love it already.
Very nicely written. Kagome and Sesshomaru are made for each other. They are so adorable. Hope they can get it together soon before the obligatory teenage first love and heartaches...typical teen angsty stuff. :|
I know this may sound like trivial nitpicking, but in chapter 1, you have Kagome at age 5 and then age 6 and Sesshomaru at age 9 years old when they first met. Later in chapter 4, he is thinking back at how it's been 5 years that he and Kagome had been walking to and from school together since they first met. That would make her 11 and him 14 but you have them as ages 13 and him 16. She in middle school and he in high school, which would probably put him as getting ready to enter into his senior year. That was how old I was going into my senior year in high school. The timing and ages just seemed a bit off. No big deal...I was just over thinking in passing. Yeah, I'm one of those kinds of people, sorry to say. LOL :)
Great job and looking forward to more chapters soon!!!
Ree-san (Chapter 3) - Mon 14 Jan 2019
Kagome is pretty blind. How could she not notice over such a long period of time? Not really good friend behavior. I think she was taking his presence for granted She still didn't really acknowledge that, only noticing when he protected himself from watching it happen and not catering to her anymore. Her age isn't an excuse really especially because she was so intuned when she was younger. I feel sorry for Sesshomaru.
Coastin (Chapter 3) - Mon 14 Jan 2019
Cuuuuuute
This is a really cute story, I can’t wait for updates and to see how Kagome makes an impact on Sesshomaru‘s life.
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