Man this story was a lovely read and I will be reading it again.
This was such a cute story! Yes, the ending seemed unconventional and not what I expected/hoped it would end, but I do appreciate stories like yours that ends in its own way. After rereading the past several chapters, I now can't imagine your story ending anyother way than what it did. I feel if it did end differently, it wouldn't be consistent with the tone of the story and the vibe of the characters.
I think that I just liked how you had set up the story (and its alternate universe) up to the point that I didn't want it to end, and had hoped a new conflict would be introduced so that it would just keep going!
Anyway, congratulations on your first, ever, completed story on this site. I hope you are proud of your accomplishment; you did a wonderful job. I look forward to your next one!
Ok the story was great but you left it open. Are you going to do a sequal or somehting? That was a open ended ending.
Deana (Chapter 11) - Tue 19 Feb 2019
Awesomw story! I loved every minute of it.
Nilee1 (Chapter 8) - Mon 18 Feb 2019
Wo, be careful Kagome!
Thats the end?
Krista (Chapter 7) - Wed 02 Jan 2019
What other part of the bet?????
wow I love this story wish u would hurry up and update this more often though sesshomaru makes a very sexy vamp
Orotami (Chapter 6) - Thu 06 Dec 2018
Awww!! I cant wait for more!! Please keep going. Don't stop!
Hey there! Great story by the way but chapters 4 and 5 are exactly the same. Not sure what happened to cause that but I thought you needed to know. Anyway thanks for writing this story. It’s cute, funny and getting terribly romantic. Yummy!!!
Dang Miroku, cant a girl keep some things to herself. I love the back and forth with Inuyasha. I thought it was also great and noble of her to feed him in his time of need. Thanks for the update.
Update soon!!!!
Orotami (Chapter 5) - Fri 30 Nov 2018
I LOVE this story. I really cant wait for the next chapter!
Oh my! I’ve been looking forward to the update for this fic! I love the vamp!Sess dynamic so much. And how protective of Kagome he is. And Kagome is definitely catching feelings for her new roomie!
Keep up the great work!
I think they are both being a bit childish in this chapter. I'm surprised at how open the are. I mean there is obviously something between them. I did like when he came to her rescue but she gave him no thanks. That's possibly why he is being so irritated with her. Maybe she needs to do some more vampire research with Kikyou or something. Thanks for the update.
I love the club setting. I think maybe Sesshoumaru is teasing her on the dance floor with the other girl. Perhaps saying this is what you could have? I love their interaction. The ending was an exciting cliffhanger. Whose lips are there? I love this story. Thanks for the update.
Jamie (Chapter 3) - Thu 29 Nov 2018
I love a good vampire story... so far, I'm impressed! Please don't be nervous about upcoming chapters, I'm sure they're going to be great! Very much looking forward to seeing where you run with this story!!
ah..it's good...fresh vampire story...not like twilight series....i like it.
the relationship with natural flowing....
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