Wow, this is really good! I can't help but to root for Sesshomaru. But I also don't want Kagome to be really hurt, or for Inuyasha to be under an enchantment and when it's broken, be seriously guilty...
Any who! I hope for more sometime soon! Thanks! :3
Wow...didn't see this coming. I love how you took advantage of your artistic creativity and switched things around a bit with Kikyou and Yasha.
I am entralled with this story.
Excellent writing.
So looking forward to more of this and thanks for continuing the story.
Cheers!!!
Faith (Chapter 1) - Mon 17 Dec 2018
Well the first chapter was incredibly sad and sweet, I loved it both as a one shot and as a first chapter. Reading the second chapter I thought I knew where you were taking it, and though it's been done, I didn't mind because I like your writing and the set up. Reading the third chapter, you definitely surprised me. I'm looking forward to seeing how you develop this. <3
Val (Chapter 2) - Wed 21 Nov 2018
I can't wait for more! Good job. I want to know it all aaaaa
You really need to write another chapter.
I am bawling here, due to the way you left it.
Though I do understand why you wont.
This one-shot is writen with Love and Respect towards the characters of the story.
Sayuri (Chapter 1) - Wed 14 Nov 2018
*crying* fluff you....!!!!!! *crying* i'll find you and i'll fluff you!!! *crying* poor Sesshoumaru~
Anonymous (Chapter 1) - Sun 11 Nov 2018
OMG! PLEASE TURN IT INTO A FULL SERIES I LOVED IT!
Aw, so sad. I can see why you said you cried while writing it. Not everyone gets the happy ending every time.
Please continue. This is great.
Toni (Chapter 1) - Sat 10 Nov 2018
too bad it's a one shot would have liked to see it continued
you must make it a twofer and give him his HEA!!!!! Inuyasha's probly sniffing around Kikyo anyway. So good.
Oh my gosh...how incredibly sad for Sesshomaru.
You're the writer, you can change the outcome. LOL :)
You could write a sequel, maybe?...someday, right?!!?
Anyway, wonderfully written.
Great writing!!!
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