[Monday 6:01pm] Finally at Chapter 32! Nasty Kagome and Sesshoumaru the blackmailer definitely isnt my cup of tea for real life people, but it works really well in this story to show all the angst and bitterness all the characters are going through. Even Kohaku!

Cant wait for the next update!

[Monday 4:18pm] I haven't been able to put down my iPad since Chapter 2! It's been a little jarring to read SessKag in such a reluctant Dom and Sub context, but yet at the same time it's so steamy, and I NEED TO KNOW MORE, and also a little emotionally-confused! You might be bringing out the new perversions in me and I don't know if that's good or bad XD

Also, Kagome not being a saint for once, or rather, not being the bigger person - and taking her frustrations out on Sesshoumaru, Kohaku, and Kanako - is so rare in fan fiction. For once, she's not willingly sacrificing herself or being nice to everyone, especially after going through such trauma. It makes her so much more human, and way more relatable.

[Monday, 1:48pm] Loving the thriller vibes! Also... *eyes Sesshoumaru suspiciously* >.>

[Monday 12:30pm] Just read Chapter 1 and you've got me absolutely hooked! It's so angsty and so dirty, just up my alley XD

Oh! Well, after this chapter I can see that Sesshomaru is a little bit obsessed with Kagome, but I don't know if is good or bad. Probably he's in love with her. 

Wow. I just binge read it. A bit on the angsty side, but definitely one I'm excited to continue reading. 

I wonder if Sesshomaru would even be satisfied with her after he's had her. He's greedy. Please update soon!!

So glad to see you've updated! I still follow your blog - I think it sucks we can't comment there because of stupid snowflakes in the past - but glad you're still able to update here anyhow. Very much hope you're doing well despite everything! Take care!

Looking forward to the next update! 

I remember bits & pieces of this story but I think I remember enough to write this review . Im starting to dislike Kagome , I completely understand her feelings when it comes to the loss of Inuyasha , you can never tell someone how long to grieve because it's something you have to get through on your own time . But the way she's treating everyone else is pathetic, I don't recall if anything other than her on going issue with Sesshomaru is the reason she tore off Rin's gift but if it's because of what's going on that has NOTHING to do with Rin & her relationship with Sesshomaru it made me really dislike her in that moment . As far as Kohaku if I remember I think she led him on a bit then rejected him... is it a justified reason for him to do what he did no not at all but the way she's handling those around her is causing all this drama , She was baiting Kohaku already knowing his feelings & knowing despite him getting upset & her rejection his feelings are still there for her . Omg then to top it off to sit & LET Kanako deal with Sesshomaru man oh man . Yes she made her decision & it's her choice but she could have stopped it , especially KNOWING what Kanako dealt with growing up . Kagome shouldn't have to ethier but she accepted to play that role & she could have thrown him a bone to get him by instead of letting Kanako lay down for something KAGOME CHOSE to make her problem & responsibility !! Yes Sesshomaru would be running around doing what he was prior but it would have been no fault of Kagome's because she's not responsible but now she is when she put herself in the middle essentially bringing that onto Kanako geez I'm so fed up with her 

ps : if I'm off somewhere in there I do apologize lol I'm going off what I think I remember. Great chap well written keep up the good work 

Whoa, this chapter fro the top looked pretty erotic lol ^^ so far so good no complaints yet.

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So this story is looking interesting.

Although I did not read the first few chapters and I have lost track since I last checked into this story the plot so far is promising.

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Oh dear God....

This went from 0 to 60. Or more like 60 to 110!! I've missed so many updates on the blog and jumped right back in to literally reading and mouthing the words "oh my damn"

From going too far with Rin's gift to drunken Kohaku at the doorstep to drunken Kohaku assault to Sesshomaru at the damn door to waif & Sessh??!!!!  My brain wasn't ready, but my eyeballs read every bit and could not (WOULD NOT) stop. You have a way of turning the scene into the perfect storm. In a way, it really mirrors what's happening in the world today. This deadly pandemic on top of the civil unrest and lack of true leadership is truly the Perfect Storm. The perfect storm for change. For growth. There's no way you can hide or deny the harsh realities surrounding us. You somehow capture this even in this story. I think maybe this is an outlet that unconsciously carries the same theme.  .

These characters are facing some very harsh realities and there's no where else to hide. The change is seriously coming. 

Well damn i meant to comment more abput them but here i am going on another damn tangent....>_<  lol

Mmmm... after this chapter I can't decide if Kanako is actually a good person or not. 

That was wild. Not sure what to make of all the messed up people.  Kagome is bitter and a touch crazy. I wonder if her and Sesshomaru can ever manage a relationship that's healthy? Seems Rin is lucky that Sesshomaru hasn't hurt her as well. This chapter was a shocker. Well written but a shocker. 

Looking forward to the next update! Can't wait, love how twisted this all is. You're a fantastic writer!

Kagome reminds me more and more of Kikyo all stern, hard headed, controllibc, and relentless in getting her way. I really liked this chapter until Sesshomaru came. I wonder what's kept him from going after Rin if he has little control. At least he didn't kill this girl. I forget if you even mentioned how old she is! I thought she was too young to go after. And the fact that Kagome didn't stop him!!!!! Ughh that pissed me off. This whole chapter has made me like her waayyy less. Kohakus jealousy was cute until it wasn't. Please update soon! 

Can't wait for more chapters to come out 

Interesting development. I think the tactician made a mistake relying on Kagome's anger and outrage for Sesshoumaru. He won't go very far trying to use that against her.

Pterodactyl screech! This chapter was so good! So... Hirokin isn't a good person? Oh Gosh, I've so many theories about him.