You can go far with this. Good job.
Hello,
so you are Tenshibeth1? Nice to meet you! :) I love this work!!!
Kagome's view is so romatic! I like to think too, that there is a path we can crave for ourselves, we just have to work hard and believe in what we are doing! Such a beautiful message!!!
And Sesshoumaru is just sweet here. Supporting her view and seeing her worth!
I also loved that you put in some humour! It definitely lighten the mood, and I had to laugh myself! :D
Overall a well written fic, I enjoyed it very much!
I really loved interaction between the two. Great story. I'm excited to read the sequel.
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