Ok ?i I read the chapter twice trying to catch those minor hidden details and hints...
You really have talent twisting my heart. The surname you used...
Everything is just perfect and details are astonishing.
I adore that Kagome is so strong even if her heart is broken. The way she said that he doesn't deserve anything from her.... Her pink glasses got really shattered.
To make something beautiful, you often have to break everything in pieces to create something new from the scratch.
Thank you for updating.
Really appreciate it and hope for more soon. You are an amazing storyteller. Please continue writing. You are definitely one of the best authors in my top list. And I not trying to copy Jaken. I really mean it.
Good luck and thanks again.
Alexis (Chapter 3) - Sun 06 May 2018
So good!!!! ????????????
van (Chapter 2) - Mon 30 Apr 2018
cant wait for next chapter! :)
How sad, how beautiful :'(
your story brings up so much emotion in my heart. Thank you
hope to se your update in near future
this is very sad and intriguing! i cant wait to see where it goes! :)
Natalia (Chapter 2) - Sat 21 Apr 2018
Despite loving this pairing, I respect kagome for leaving. There are few fics that portray kagome as strong despite having her heart broken. I absolutely am in awe how she had the strength to leave, just give up. It takes lots of courage to give up on your love. And she loved him since she was little. I also love that she is from some prominent clan or family and for once it would be a... How should I say this? Often times kagome is poor and a match with her is a bad choice for him yada yada... But here she is a heiress yes?
And how truly foolish and ignorant was sesshoumaru... The phrase where he remembered that he whispered another woman's name while she tended to him.. it must have been devastating for Kagome.... Don't let me draston the trip that he simply forgot. Because if Rin. A little bit too late he realised his mistsmis. The wake up call was again late only when she decided to let go.
I must say this is quickly and surely becoming one of my favourite fics. You really have talent and I admire your writing style.
Good luck with your writing.
Take care and thx for updating. So yeah, erm update soon? I have read the chapters at least three times.
Cheers!
So sad... I can’t wait to read more!!!! I feel so sad for Kagome, she just gave up after trying so hard...
I like this looking forward to seeing more.
That was interesting I just wish your chapters weren't so short lol I know I'm greedy. I await you next update.
Wow, so good! I'm already crying and it's only the second chapter! Keep up the good work!!
Alexis (Chapter 2) - Fri 20 Apr 2018
So good! Can’t wait for more!
Shayla (Chapter 2) - Fri 20 Apr 2018
Just wow..like I'm totally speechless of how good of a writer you are ...I am definitely excited about next chapter
Wow, that was so exciting to read. It made me squeal at the end. That's how good that was.
Interesting read - I look forward to how this will progress
Susy V (Chapter 1) - Wed 11 Apr 2018
Wow, what a first chapter!!
You got me hooked again. Love it. So mysterious. I gotta know what happens next.
Deana (Chapter 1) - Tue 10 Apr 2018
OMG! How cruel that you write just a preview that is a cliff hanger? Have you no mercy on us poor readers? Anyhow what a cgreat chapter and I can't wit to see where you're going with this.
I really want to read more!!!! ;)
Jazma (Chapter 1) - Tue 10 Apr 2018
With just one chapter, I am completely hooked. I need more chapters please.
I can't wait to see where the story goes!!
Wow that sure has a lot of intriguing information I can't wait to see where it goes next.
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