I love where you’re going with this story! Beautifully written!

oh my gosh!!!! She has a beast!! This is going to be fun!!

Damn I wish Kagome did zap her! She was so annoying!

but that ending ! Whew! Muy Caliente! That was intense can't wait to see what happens next girl!

Aaaawe!  I love their relationship!

Yesss!!!

Although I’m super excited to see more from this loved story, i was hoping for a longer chapter after the wait! Great update though, can’t wait for more!

Was Onigumo the aura she had felt at the club? What was going on with the car crash? All this unknown! Update soon!

Love this story so much!

so happy to see you writing again!

????????Independent Kagome I like!

Oh this is a good story, I remember part of it from some time ago then it stopped once in the mannor and she decided to go home or something...  Hmmm gosh so many stories want to blend in with this one.  I do hope I'm right about this story being written some time ago and waiting on the missing chapters.  Anyways love the story update soon.

Holy Crap Steph! I still love your writing ????. I am most definitely in love with the new version as well. Miroku and Kagome-sama relationship is adorable and Sango is awesome for being able to see that nothings going on. 

Kouga...is Kouga I remember vaguely what he was like when you wrote this the first time and now I’m eager to see how Kagome became how she used to be. Can’t wait for the next update! 

What a great plot and beginning!!! Update again!!!

Greetings...I had been reading  your stories..  and I really like this one ...hopefully please uodate... I had read this before you had edited this story and I had been eagerly waiting for the next chapters ...thank you very much

This is by far my new favorite story! It’s amazingly written; everyone is so true to their character! i can’t wait for more!

So happy to see you writing again! I did like the old version, too, but the new background story seems really interesting! Can't wait to see what you've come up with.

There's only one thing i wanted to ask/complain about; how come you disabled anonymous reading just for this story? Had to actually create an account to read it... And yes, I realize it's not that big of a deal, but still.

I like this version of the story.  It goes into detail of the what, when, how and why of the original version. I actually loved the first one and this

version just makes it better.  I hope you get a chance to finish this story but RL comes first. 

Looking forward to future updates.

Great job!!!

You just don't know how happy I am to see this story back up!!!!!! YAY!!!! Hurry and update!

-Kendra

Great to see you back! 

Interesting so far.  I like that we get back story this time.  With the first version it was hard to understand why Sesshomaru had been keeping a watch on Kagome since she was little when it was revealed.  Now we understand.  Can’t wait to read what happens next.