last three chapters were a very nice end to a sweet evening. Thank you for the updates.
This fic has a Resmiranda feel to it, thanks to your beautiful prose. I'm pleasantly surprised by your range in style of writing as I've read your Misfits fic in the sesskag discord which is another piece of great writing, (and is in dire need to get updated!) but gave a totally different vibe. Hope you have a great day.
Nilee1 (Chapter 43) - Wed 13 May 2020
This just gets better and better!
susie (Chapter 46) - Wed 13 May 2020
i liked the way you laid this out.
and yeah, you get in his car ;) cute.
I read it I lone it gasp falls.over dead
I'm going to comment over the most random elements of this story. But aurum. Such a perfect word for describing his eyes, and it's not one I've seen before. Well done, you!
Williams vibe. Williams vibe. :)
Stopped him dead in his nosey tracks. Good job Kagome! Nicely played! Thank you for updating. Hope all is well at your end.
Awww cute fluffiness.
The chapter names are making me try to come up with new verses of Mambo No. 5.
I'll try and read more tomorrow! Ty for keeping me occupied with your words!
Oh if his past self could hear him now. Ruff revelation.
I like the way you describe feeling without describing feelings.
I like this take on things. Usually everyone addresses everything quickly. The waiting is a nice change of pace.
hahaha Sesshomaru is vintage. perf.
lol, nice. The little punches are great.
Ohhh...things are getting very intriguing. A little subterfuge from crafty kids. Very nice update!
This party is getting very interesting. Nice updates. Cheers!
Adorable <3!!
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