i just binged this and i love it!  this is so not what i expected to go down, but it is very exciting.

good story but as i read it i cant help but picture the movie Grease

I cannot remember how many times I've reread this story. It is the only decently written teacher-student fic I've ever read, and in that context, it's far more than decent. It's flipping great! <3 But I don't think you'll ever finish it. Real tragedy, that is. Fo serial. Still just as glorious as when I first read it back on SS.

i love this story! hope you'll decide to start it again.

i really love this story! i hope you'll continue it soon because i want to know whats going to happen next. great work :)

Oh please, this is so good, you can't just leave it here! But does naraku know? He's part of the team right? But he's her friend now though..I think.....so....

Ugh. Toran's pissing me off. Damn cat.

Please update this story! I really like it~

Thanx

So I've read this far, and while it's an okay read, I have to admit I've gotten a bit...bored with it. I'm sorry!! But this is almost exactly like Grease, something you never even credit, and you even type the phrase "hopelessly devoted" when Kagome goes outside during the sleepover -- not to mention the fact that you referenced a lot of the lines in the song, like "my head is saying, 'fool, forget him'". Anyway, to make a long story short, this is getting too Grease-based [the few variations are good, but you don't really take them to the next level, you know?].

I'll admit, though, that there are some good points to this story. I want to make sure you know that I'm not leaving a flame, just some constructive criticism and you shouldn't take offense to anything I write here. :] I love the way you write about Sesshoumaru's feelings for Kagome, and it makes me feel all jittery inside. I like the fact that he's her teacher and not a student, and I admit that I was surprised when I found that out.

But, like I said, the Grease thing is almost competely taking over this story, and you need to be more original if you want this to be a bigger success. Anyone can imagine Grease with Kagome and Sesshoumaru taking the places of Sandy and Danny, and anyone can see that Kagura is Rizzo and Naraku's a player and the girls are the Pink Ladies. So you have to prove to us readers that you can think of ideas on your own and carry them out. I think you can do it, so good luck with it! :]

xx

So I've read this far, and while it's an okay read, I have to admit I've gotten a bit...bored with it. I'm sorry!! But this is almost exactly like Grease, something you never even credit, and you even type the phrase "hopelessly devoted" when Kagome goes outside during the sleepover -- not to mention the fact that you referenced a lot of the lines in the song, like "my head is saying, 'fool, forget him'". Anyway, to make a long story short, this is getting too Grease-based [the few variations are good, but you don't really take them to the next level, you know?].

I'll admit, though, that there are some good points to this story. I want to make sure you know that I'm not leaving a flame, just some constructive criticism and you shouldn't take offense to anything I write here. :] I love the way you write about Sesshoumaru's feelings for Kagome, and it makes me feel all jittery inside. I like the fact that he's her teacher and not a student, and I admit that I was surprised when I found that out.

But, like I said, the Grease thing is almost competely taking over this story, and you need to be more original if you want this to be a bigger success. Anyone can imagine Grease with Kagome and Sesshoumaru taking the places of Sandy and Danny, and anyone can see that Kagura is Rizzo and Naraku's a player and the girls are the Pink Ladies. So you have to prove to us readers that you can think of ideas on your own and carry them out. I think you can do it, so good luck with it! :]

xx

So I've read this far, and while it's an okay read, I have to admit I've gotten a bit...bored with it. I'm sorry!! But this is almost exactly like Grease, something you never even credit, and you even type the phrase "hopelessly devoted" when Kagome goes outside during the sleepover -- not to mention the fact that you referenced a lot of the lines in the song, like "my head is saying, 'fool, forget him'". Anyway, to make a long story short, this is getting too Grease-based [the few variations are good, but you don't really take them to the next level, you know?].

I'll admit, though, that there are some good points to this story. I want to make sure you know that I'm not leaving a flame, just some constructive criticism and you shouldn't take offense to anything I write here. :] I love the way you write about Sesshoumaru's feelings for Kagome, and it makes me feel all jittery inside. I like the fact that he's her teacher and not a student, and I admit that I was surprised when I found that out.

But, like I said, the Grease thing is almost competely taking over this story, and you need to be more original if you want this to be a bigger success. Anyone can imagine Grease with Kagome and Sesshoumaru taking the places of Sandy and Danny, and anyone can see that Kagura is Rizzo and Naraku's a player and the girls are the Pink Ladies. So you have to prove to us readers that you can think of ideas on your own and carry them out. I think you can do it, so good luck with it! :]

xx

OMG plz update this is grea I love it!!!!!!!!! PLZ PLZ PLZ

I thoroughly enjoyed this story and don't understand why more people didn't review it!  It's a great take on a classic story, and I love where you went with it.  Sesshoumaru as a teacher?  I want to go to that school!  XD  But you had a great combination of high school drama, romance, and comedy.  All in all, great work, once again.  And I can't wait to finish reading Unexpected Circumstances!  Keep up the great writing!

More! More! More! Hehehe : ) I love this story too!!