This story is both hilarious and dramatic all at once. I love how sesshomaru is in character but also having uncharacteristic moments. I also like his grandfather and the fact that sesshomaru can't go against him. Not just out of power but respect as well. I thought just for a second, which was foolish that asuna would be giving her son an out. But she's clever and knows her son well.
I wonder who's coming into the room this time?
Update soon onegai
Ja ne
AWK!! This is just too much fun! He is defeated by his mother and grandfather. We know mom wants grand pups. Looking forward to more!
This is great! I'd really like to see where this story goes, waiting for the next update!
Hehe! I like it a lot!! Can't wait to see what happens next :D
AWK!! Loving this so far. Sorry but I thought I had reviewed the first chapter. Since I have not read the original, this will be new for me. Delightful so far. Looking forward to to your next update. Cheers!
kB (Chapter 2) - Mon 23 Oct 2017
Great update! Can't wait for the rest!
Nice start can't wait to read the rest ((^_-)
Nallely (Chapter 1) - Fri 13 Oct 2017
Hello!! I really like this firts chapter, the grandfather's idea sounds like fun and I hope you can update son.
I did read the old version of this story on FF.net and is on my fav list. I am glad to see that you are posting it on this site. Truthfully, I saw nothing wrong with the old old version except minor errors here and there. These errors did not detract from the story at all in my opinion. I loved it over there and I will love it here. I'm not sure if I ever reviewed the old version, I have a different user name there.
I like your sense of dry humor that you intergrated into Sessho's personality. I did not see any changes in this first chapter and I give two thumbs up for the starting chapter. Of course I will read this new version. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters in this delightful story. Great job in the writing department. Keep it going!!!
Yay I love this so far! Can't wait to read more :)
I am looking forward to this new version of yours. I loved reading the old version of the story you had in the past as well on the other site. I love your writing style and your comedic timing. Keep up the good work! Excited for the new chapters!
I am looking forward to this new version of yours. I loved reading the old version of the story you had in the past as well on the other site. I love your writing style and your comedic timing. Keep up the good work! Exited for the new chapters!
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