I loved this piece, would you consider extending it into chapters? It was a lovely piece to read thanks.

This had to be one of the best stories I've read! When I finished, I was like, I can't wait for the next chapter! Then I saw  it  was a one shot and wanted to cry! Lol, I love your writing and storytelling. 

Thank you so much for writing this! 

I really wish this would continue, but it is a super cute one shot!

you have to make this into a short story!!

im in love! pleaseeeee ^_^!!!

That was So Cute Loved the Picture with it

Awe you should make this to a short chapter story 

I wish you would continue with your oneshot. I want to know more about what happens the next day when they have their date.

Pretty please.

Haha! I was just browsing Sakimi-chan's art this afternoon and recognized it as the inspiration halfway through the story! Nicely done! I particularly enjoyed how Kagome is saved by Rin :)

As I was reading I kept think I g of the picture thru out. Now you need to do a second chapter with the nsfw pic and inspiration. I can tell you that there are to and one is him in traditional Japanese undies.

Dam, will sh you had written more chapter.  i can dream of you doing more.

seen the pic, SEX on a Stick 

OMG, I was in love with that picture a long time ago and now I love your story even more. When I read it, the first thing that popped in my head was that picture too, so I guess you nail it!!!! oh pls give me more... 

Darn it! It's Over!! One more chapter please!!!

So good! Please continue! You truly have a gift!

aw squeal! so awesome! and i know that picture! its perfect for it thx for posting! you are an inspiration for me and while reading your work i push myself harder to get better! thx for sharing!

sorry this is only a one shot  liked the story

Honestly too good to be a one shot you should continue