This chapter was a little sad. I felt so bad for Sessho being all alone. I hope he gets the courage to make himself known to Kagome and Rin soon. I wonder if Rin will remember him, that would be so nice that she would have a few memories of him. I think he would have put a smile on Kagome's face if he had told her who he was...maybe next time...I hope.
You did a wonderful job in making me feel the emotions the three of them were having, ergo the sadness.
Great job and keep up the excellent writing.
This is so cute! I like how Sesshomaru is like "Wait, I'm not a stalker right? RIGHT?" XD
Sayuri (Chapter 1) - Fri 14 Jul 2017
OMG!!! I can't wait for more!!! *.* you did a great job so far! <3 :hugs:
You don't know how much you made me feel with this little story...hoping for you to make a continuation....can you also post this on Sesskagweek tumblr blog...you're awesome!
This is a sweet and well written start to a lovely and hopefully a happy ending little story. I love it already.
I hope their wishes come true and it would be extra sweet if Kagome's wish for some one from the past turned out to be Sesshomaru and that he happened to have been her secret love interest instead of Inuyasha. That would be my twist on the story and of course Rin's wish for a 'daddy' would be Sesshomaru.
In my opinion you are an excellent writer and hopefully one day, if not already, you will be a wonderful published author. Fantastic job!!!
Wow...I rather like this.
Wow just wow can't wait to read more. Very good
A promising start. It invoked a light hearted feeling.
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