I can't help but think that this is a crafty trap! The naruto exam comes to mind! Thx for updating!

I remember when my chemistry teacher pulled this trick to drive it home that we should be reading the instructions carefully when we do tests and assignments. It was basically a long thing of questions but the first question said to read the last one, which just said to only put down your name. So basically if you were following directions you would know that the only thing required of you was to put your name down. Now I don't know if that it what you did, but if it is then awesome! Because the sign of a good leader is not only to be able to give direction but to listen to the ones they are leading as well. You cannot lead anything if none will follow you, and people only stay (don't revolt) when they feel their voice is heard. An even better leader is able to take those voiced opinions/concerns/emotions and use them to better the group as a whole (along with themselves), for the leader is the head/mouthpiece of the group their actions representing the collective whole for all the results lay on their skills. Someone could mess up, and the fault will be laid on the leader since they are the ones that are supposed to be in charge. In my opinion. Regardless, I loved the new chapters and love the story so far. I can't wait to read the next one and hope you update soon.

I need more please! The story is very interesting so far and I cannot wait to see what will help next.

Hmm, can't wait for reason she entered.

I have to say, I'm hooked! Already at that, lol. I truly hope you update soon, because you have a new story subscriber. This is an amazing concept, and I honestly can't wait to see it all play out. "Who is Kagome Higurashi?" Because that's what I wanna read and find out about in this story. 

love it 

it's very interesting love the idea please update soon

Hmm interesting. Why is there no scent of mortality? Is kagome immortal or do her powers give her longevity preventing her from ageing? Will the daiyoukai allow her application to go through?

Update soon onegai

Ja ne

Very interestin. I look forward to reading more. Very unique.

This story looks like it will be interesting and I am looking forward to reading more so I hope it will be continued

Interesting

It's quite interesting, a good start for a starter :)))))

I like the plot so far, it made me curious. Sorry I'm not a native Eng speaker, so I can't help you beta reading, but I will support you, please keep going!!

Great!!!  I hole you can update soon.

Oh, such an interesting premise! I hope you do continue writing more for this story, I haven't read anything like this before.

Congrats on an amazing chapter!

Off to a decent start. I think I'll enjoy where this fic goes. A few minor word flow issues in the beginning of the chapter...but other than that I'm digging it. Looking forward to your next update!

Hey Minime,

I don't usually leave reviews on here but I felt the need to try and help you. love the idea behind your story but you do need to watch your tenses in your sentences. The plot is good and as long as you are able to keep the tenses right, you should have a good story.  Maybe you should invest in a beta. I would be happy to offer any assistance, if you so choose. Otherwise, keep up the good work. 

-tiffd618

Please update soon I am intrigued by this story!  I think that you have a wonderful idea here!

I am intrigued by this story already! I hope you update soon because I can't wait to see where this goes.