This is by far my favorite fan fiction - and I've read thousands! I can't wait for more chapters!!!
This was an informative and fascinating chapter. It gave more insight into Kagome's powers. If Naraku has been trying to mess with Kagome's mind through her dreams could it be possible that he has been creating those dreams of her and Sessho together...nah I don't think so. He wants to destroy her love for Sessho not help to increase it.
With Kagome's sudden interest in the heart and liver of her kills all of a sudden and her need for raw meat...since she has had finally had sex with Sessho in her dream world, is it possible that she could get pregnant? I know that is sounds silly but their dream world together seems awfully real because there seems to be some after effects during their interactions with one another. I only bring this up because I read a fic where the author used a method that Sessho used to get Kagome pregnant by going into her dreams but he never let himself be known to her (I don't remember the name or author of this story). It seems like an interesting concept. I would love to see this effect happen here...it would be fascinating in this story...it would cause all kinds of misunderstandings and the like...just in my dreams...LOL
Kagome is needed to defeat Naraku so there cannot be that kind of distraction anyway. Besides your story is wonderful the way it is and I's sure you already have it outlined the way you want it to go and end
Loved the chapter and as usual well written. Looking forward to the next update from one of my favorite fic writers. :)
awesome story so far looking forward to more.
Great chapter. Inuyasha is as stupid as stupid can be. What can he gain by almost killing Kagome? He certainly would not get her to submit, mate her and have pups with her if she is dead...that's why he is so stupid...well he did mate a dead woman so that proves it.
I know that Sessho is at his regular normal size in the dream sequence but do they remember their dreams or what happens in them? I love the scene where Sessho almost gives up his life to save Kagome...now that is real love..will they remember this?
I will be glad when Sessho gets back to his normal size in the real world so that he can claim Kagome and mate her but I suppose that is so far down the road in chaptersville. lol Looking forward to that chapter and of course the others to come.
Fantastic writing.!!!
What a great update. I am very much looking forward to more. Though I am excited about when they are finally going to find Koga. I am wondering if he will respect her telling him that or if he is going to try and fight her to become her alpha male? and How Sesshoumaru will deal with Koga. This is a good story. (Though I am growing to hate Inuyasha in this, Kikio too) One thing about making the woman submitt does sound a lot like rape but I don't think it is meant to? Maybe it is supposed to show the other how strong they can be a what a good protector they would be but...still it is hard to read that and not think that demons who want to mate must end up raping eachother sometimes? isn't there anything the Female can do if the male is stronger and she still dosn't want to mate?
When will Sesshoumar go back to his regular size? Is it soon? Please!
Dedge (Chapter 19) - Thu 13 Jul 2017
Is he big? Was that scene in a dream? I'm confused but it was hot!!!
Loving the stor. The plot is thrillin. Howeve, one little comment on who would know more about youK. Sa go is a hunter of youk, while Miroku is only a monk. I think she would be the one who might educate the monk more than the other way aroun.
what a sad heart breaking chapter. I hope Shippou realizes that Kagome was trying to protect him, as far as inuyasha and Kikio are concerned I am kind of getting sick of seeing them. he has betrayed Kagome in the worst way and tried to kill her if he wasn't needed in the final battle with Naraku I would just suggest them both going the way of the Dodo. LOL yah so. can we at least get rid of Kikio? ultimately whatever you decide I am looking forward to more. even if it has more Inu and Kikio.
Omg???? I love this story
It seems like they are in Bokesnou's forest because of the barrier, the densness of the forest and plus Sessho mentioned that the Goshinboku tree is its son. And why no one has asked how he was able to break through the barrier with ease. So where is the tree demon or why has he not made himself known to them? If he hasn't already talked to the demon tree yet about the spell on himself, he could askd him how can he be break it.
Sessho just needs to come right out and spell it in black and white for Kagome that he loves her and intends to mate her when the spell is broken because obviously Kagome can not read the signs and his closeness to her that he has feelings for her and he is showing them to her. She is not really paying attention to him, sometimes she can be so dense herself. Really this part of the story is so frustrating between these two idiots. lol
The other reason is so obvious that Sessho should tell her of his feelings and plans so she won't be walking around all down in the mouth about the situation with Shippo. She has not lost him.
I know, I know patience grasshopper. All will be revealed in the upcoming chapters. lol :) Anyway great chapter and excellent writing.
How sad for Kagome. She doesn't know Sess is planning on joining their packs. looking forward to more. thanks.
Deana (Chapter 17) - Fri 30 Jun 2017
Awesome chapter! Can't wait for the next one.
Dedge (Chapter 17) - Fri 30 Jun 2017
When he is going to get bigger???!!!
awesome. looking forward to more. Is shippou getting ready to have a growth spurt? that is my guess.
Hmmm. I like it so far. The only thing that bugs me right now that is Kagome is acting like she is Sesshomeru's alpha. Which she isn't. She herself said that he is a guest in her pack but recognizes that he is also an alpha. Sesshomeru I think has been pretty forgiving of Kagome. I mean she knocked him out and he didnt question it and even wasnt upset when he came to. I dunno, I just feel like Kagome isn't trying to understand him as a demon, even though she is playing the role of a 'demon' alpha. Half her hangups is because she has not wrapped her mind around him being a demon KING. With all that entails, land, governing, laws, ect. Also, she whines about he would never accept her as a mate, though he is constantly coming to her aid and showing her affection. She doesnt consider that taking a human for a mate, for a demon who only mates once, would be crushing if she died from old age. She didn't consider the assination attempts that would be made on Sesshomeru's mate if he mated against the social norm, so she has to be strong. She didn't consider any of the politics that would come with the mating of a king. What I am trying to say is that she is not really considering Sesshomeru's feelings and he is just going on the ride of hers because he loves her. This isn't a flame. I love your writing and the story that you are tell. I just wish Kagome treated Sesshomeru more as the alpha he is instead of a beta.
You know I never would have believed that english was not your native tongue. You write so brilliantly. There's been a few authors that have butchered the english language and it is their native tongue so you are doing great for it not to be.
I loved this chapter. I like how you made Kagome with this bad ass, kick ass and take no prisoners attitude. That fight scene was awesome.
I have to shake my head at Inuyasha's thinking that he is going to get Kagome and his pack back. He is so dilusional and walking around with a dead mate thinking she is the real deal. I pity the fool.
Sessho telling Kagome that basically inu youkai not only looks for a powerful mate for a reason but also for love and attention. That was a nice and loving statement coming from him, but they are both still dancing around the truth about their true feelings...I know this will become clearer in the future chapters. At least he admitted to himself that he is in love with Kagome.
I am looking forward to the future chapters to this wonderful story. Excellent writing job!!!
For english not to be your first language, I must say you have a better grasp on it than some authors I've read whose language it actually IS. I couldn't tell it was a secondary language for you, so well done on that regard. As for Moko-Moko-Sama, Rin was the only one to call it that and it translates literally to Lord Fluff-Fluff. He was never really without it so whose to say what it actually is? I have seen people make it a manifestation of his youki, a tail, a seperate entity/ retainer, a symbol of his status/age, and just a decoration. I am thoroughly enjoying your story and can't wait to read more. As for the chapter? LOVED IT! Kagome kicked ass, and Sesshomaru thwarting Inuyasha and Kikiyo was just great. I am looking forward to more form you. Keep up the great writting.
excellent update though I wish the chapter was longer and didn't have a cliffy ending. Sesshoumaru is going to be pissed and I don't blame him. Kagome just forced her will upon him. Yes, it was to protect him but he is an adult and has free will too. I kind of wish she had somehow convinced him to stay back until she could get the barrior to fall and he would be her backup in case things went wrong. I think he would have been more open to listening to her that way. Instead to me it seems like she took the easy way out that didn't respect him for who he is. anyway that was my only problem with the chapter. I get that he is super stubborn and can teach rocks but I wish she had tried harder to get him to stay of his own free will first.
Ah, you manage to bring in a connection of sorts for Kagome and Sessho despite their size differences through a joined dream scene and imaginary sexcapade between the two. Brilliant. I really enjoyed reading this chapter, it was excellently written.
Too bad the dream was not real enough to leave some sort of remnant behind like the mark Sessho gave Kagome, now that would have been an awesome dream. lol
Loving this story. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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