Getting really good.
Dun, dun, dun! What a way to end the chapter. I liked how you had this chapter laid out as a steady progression of Kagome grieving her lost eyesight, and Shippou helping Kagome get back on her feet and more like herself. I look forward to reading how Sesshoumaru will tie into everything. I wonder what he might know that can help them determine why she lost her eyesight, as well as helping Kagome grow (because that's a feeling I have...). Anyway, thanks again for another great update. I look forward to chapter 4!
Good chapters. Keep it up!
Oh goodness! still no idea how she was injured...it does seem like she does have hyper-sensory awareness (touch and sound). I wonder if there's some sort of blessing in disguise in the woks here...i'm curious as to how you will have Sesshoumaru and Rin play a part in this... whatever you do, I am really looking forward to it! Great update!
Ok! This has to be updated soon!! what happened to Kagome? Why is she blind? Is everyone else in their group okay? Gosh! XD
Oh please don't leave me hanging.
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