I feel like you're writing some random story and only using the characters' names. Everyone is extremely out of character, which unfortunately is a huge deterrent for me. After trying to read this I feel like I felt after finishing Breaking Dawn. It's so happy that it's almost sickening.

the story has been really good so far what was done to naraku . SWEEEEEET. that was nice what you did for kanna and kagura and the kitsune in the story about kikyo kaede was right she did not belong in this lifetime. now what you did to sango and miroku waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah i will never forgive you sango was my favorite character besides sesshomaru and kagome and you are just cruel but the story besides that awesome!

Waaaaaaaaaa up-up-update s-s-soooon

great job I love it keep up the great work and UPDATE SOOON

Who said it was to long? I'll bite their kneecaps off!! @____@ lol sorry i'm short it's about all i can do! ^_____^ I love your story and I can't wait to see what happens next.

I hope that you get better soon! Because if you stay sick i'll cry cause then i'll never know what happens!

I.S.

Great Job I loved It keep up the great work and UPDATE SOOOOOOOOON

ano, people are mean sometimes =P I just ignore them when that happens. I liked your little joke, i thought it was funny ^___^.

Well I hope to see when you update again, I really like this story.

Until next time,

I.S.

Great job this story made me sooo happy I got tears in my eyes update sooon

Oh wow! I love this story!!! I am very glad to have stumbled onto this site! ^__^ I hope that the next chapter is out soon.

Until next time,

I.S.

Great job update soooooooooooooooooon okay promise

Great now she's awake update soon

EVIL EVIL EVIL you stop at the worst time (pout pout pout) update soooooooooooooooooon

you got me crying waahhhh poor Sesshomaru :( :(:( u-upd-d-date S-o-o-n-n-n

aww man you always have to stop it at the good part (pout pout pout!!!!!!!!)

Great Chapter are you going to do vist pt 2? update sooon

wwaaa y did u have 2 stop there ( pout pout pout) keep up the good work I love this story update soon

great job Three months!!!! update soon

Go to hell Kikyo I really do hate her update soon