Mi piace che i capitoli sono più lunghi questo era un capitolo interessante non vedo l'ora per il prossimo.
great banquet scene! I love the details of the high yokai courts, and am excited to see these new characters fleshed out/brought more into play in the story! There is SO much you could do with this foundation you have laid! I could easily see this story being over 60 chapters, if not 100. I personally enjoy longer stories that are full of intrigue, and dialogue, and unhurried character and plot development.
The details that keep me on the edge of my seat are: Sesshomaru's personality and how family oriented he is now.... how gentle and gentlemanly he is, especially with these human females in his family... Kagome having such a place of importance in the Western family, and her undoubtedly powerful child that she is carrying... How she will assert her influence (albeit gentle and balanced) over the palace and yokai court... and how that transition will occur once Inuyasha has passed.
maybe he dies right before the baby is born, and she will need the support of Sesshomaru's yokai to have a healthy and successful delivery. It will be his duty as the alpha to keep her from falling into despair after Inuyasha's passing and to help keep the pup in touch with the missing yokai her father.
idk, just brainstorming:). GOOD LUCK! And happy new year!
"Looking away Sesshomaru nodded, not being able to look into his little sister's face without wanting to pinch her cheeks."
I just about died laughing at this, OMG.
Keep up good work! This chapter was lovely! Well written, unhurried, and full of good detail/dialogue/character development:)
I looooove this! Excited to see how they are received in court is what life has in store for them here! ????
And, oh my goodness! Sesshomaru better be pleased with them!
I think my jaw hit the floor with this interaction between Sesshomaru and InuYasha! Well written and inspired to take this route! I am not the greatest fan of InuYasha's character but I can see how you are drawing on his amiable qualities, and giving depth to his and Kagome's relationship.
so, is the well closed in your story, or is she just to pregnant to travel home?
Natalia (Chapter 7) - Sat 31 Dec 2016
Awesome! Thx for updating so soon! I hope the mom won't be too mean!
Violla (Chapter 7) - Sat 31 Dec 2016
Sono contenta che ai aggiornato,non vedo l'ora di sapere che succederà.
Violla (Chapter 6) - Fri 30 Dec 2016
Una storia davvero interessante spero che aggiorni piu spesso.
Marie (Chapter 6) - Fri 30 Dec 2016
How sad i like inu so far but the idea is for sesshomaru to be with kagome. The problem with well strategized character and well written plot i suppose.
Toni (Chapter 6) - Fri 30 Dec 2016
love this keep it up
Natalia (Chapter 6) - Fri 30 Dec 2016
Oh stop saying inuyasha will die! he is amazing here! I feel bad that he will die. thx for updating! awesome chapter.
Natalia (Chapter 6) - Fri 30 Dec 2016
Oh stop saying inuyasha will die! he is amazing here! I feel bad that he will die. thx for updating! awesome chapter.
Leaora (Chapter 5) - Tue 25 Oct 2016
This is my favorite version of Inuyasha since I read A Willing Spirit, but...go he must!
Nice chap great little fashion show.
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