Looking forward to more!!!
Loving this story.
This should be interesting, can't wait to see what awaits kagome and hope they manage to get Rins dress done
Excited for the next chapter! Thank you for the update ????
I hope you get better
I'm loving this so far, sometimes is seems rushed but I like how portrayed kagome. Also I can't even imagine what your going through you are amazing kick cancer ass
I I like the story. I look forward to reading more.
I hope you continue
Love it! Keep up the updates I can't wait to see what happens next ;)
Good luck and work hard! Nice chapter (:
Wondeful story so far. I have read the reviews and have to agree with many I have read regarding grammar. Otherwise the story is easy to follow and the premise is great. Keep writing! I can't wait to read more about Sess and Kagome.
Epic!!!!! La Sad that there Aren't anymore until Christmas. I Hope Life is Treating you Well. Have a Great Two and a Half Months.
Hehehehe Rin is Adorable!
They are So Cute
Okay. I understand that you are uncomfortable with the word saw. I'm guessing probably an association with the movies. I had a friend who reacted similarly years ago.
There are grammatically correct alternatives:
I have seen
He has seen
You have seen
What she had seen
This story really has a lot of potential, but personally grammar mistakes ruins the flow for me.
I will continue reading because it is intriguing, though I do suggest you get a beta that can proofread for you, so that you avoid grammar mistakes, and one who can also maybe give some tips on the structure of your storytelling :3
Good luck on further chapters!
Great but there was some spelling errors.
Too funny on Kagome's reaction every time they kiss! I can tell things are definitely going to get heated up real soon. Keep it coming!
Yummy. Nice chapter. I Liked it. Especially the kiss scene. Nice writing job. Will be looking for more chapters and I can't wait for the mating scene. lol
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