Hem..a little bit closer...Love In the air

I'm absolutely in love with this story, I dont find many space/interplanetary stories that hold my interest really well, but this one is a ripper.

cant wait to read more. :D

Okay nice filler story. At least we got a little more info on Kagome and Sessho even though they both are telling lies to each other.  What are their actual ages in this story? Does Kagome have any sexual experiences or is she a virgin?  They seem to be sexually attracted to each other. I would like to see some action between them. lol

It was an enjoyable chapter. Great job!

I'm loving this! It's so different and so well worded! I can't wait for more :)

Gotta say this has to be one of the most unique and interesting plots I've seen in awhile! I'm enjoying it!

Wonderful plot and writing skills! I can't wait for more!! 

How about the past kagome's live stories or backgound? And a sesshy's family or something?... 

The interaction was great. I can't wait to read some more. And yes for the glosserh please, that would be really appreciated. I'm actually really curious to see the reaction Sessh will have with Kagome's info. 

Interesting story so far. I like a/u you've created. Can't wait to see more.

   Yay! Thank you so much for updating :D I greatly enjoyed this chapter ^^

   I love that you're showing Sesshomaru's darker side. I too favor bad guys over heroes. Don't get me wrong I adore fluffy moments. 

   I laughed so hard at the image of Sesshomaru being a fish. Him being in charge of an drug cartel fits. It does bring up a ton of questions that I can't wait to find out the answers to =) 

   Are you going to write Naraku in? Is he the one that wants Sesshomaru dead? Lol sorry ^-^ I have a ton of questions. 

   You're doing great at writing the characters!!!

I'm not much for sci-fi but I just love how much detail and imagination you e put into your story. 

I can't believe, well, I really can, but Sessh seriously walked out of her house, went to tourter someone and then came back since he was in pain. HOW RUDE! Lol, I love how you're keeping him true to the killing perfection that he is. Can't wait to read the next installment

BTW, I'm so immersed by this that's InuYasha didn't even cross my mind! Will he be making an appearance?

So I got thru all 5 chapters and still love it! I adore the universe you've created and you have done a great job of describing details for a reader's "mind eyes". I look forward to seeing more of this story. Great job!

<3 L

I've only read a bit so far, but I love it! Well written and novel story idea. Now, don't get me wrong, I don't mind new takes on rehashed plots, but novel ideas are nice once and a while.

It actually reminds me of a book I love called Hunter's Claim by SE Smith (I would rate the book MA, just saying, lol). It's about Earth being taken over by the Alliance and how love is forged between an alien male and human female. In fact, I could picture Sesshoumaru as the main character. Very nummy, loved the whole series of 4 books. Honto ni osusume desu!

But, yes, I loved the story so far and look forward to reading more!

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Good thing kagome likes gore since sesshomaru tortured the mess out of that guy. 

Nice chapter as usual but just a little slow this time but it did give a little background info on Sessho. You wouldn't happen to have a glossary of the definition of the strange sounding words or do you just make them up as you go along? Kagome's species sounds like she could be from planet earth. Is that where she originates from? Is she human?

Great job. Looking forward to more chapters.

I really really like this story. The sci-fi setting is really fun and refreshing. Did you come up with it on your own or is it based on something? I like bad guy Sesshoumaru too. Kagome's character is good and I'm interested to see her species and what secrets she's hiding although I do think she was a little too nice. I mean we know Kagome is nice but day 2 of some strange wounded guy hiding at your place and she's hanging out and watching movies with him? Just seems like she should be a bit more wary of her interactions with him even more so than sleeping with a gun under her pillow. That and I almost think he should be more wary too. If enemies are looking for him and know he's in the area and it's apparently that easy for them to hack someone's system it would be simple to find him based on her purchases for pain stuff and extra food with Sota not there. Just a thought. Also will we see any other canon characters? It be nice to see what species they may turn up as. Anyway keep up the good work and this quick posting schedule :) lol 

A drug dealer? Sesshomaru? And galaxy gangster live? A thriller yay...

Can't stop wondering about kagome and her past. It's great so far!

this story is honestly such a breath of fresh air and I can't wait to read more!

Sessho is a badass as usual but he is still my favorite character. I love how you came up the foreign words to describe objects, food, money and other species. Where did you get your inspiration for the words? I think thwy are ver imaginative and fits right in the story line. You are doing a great job in writing this tale. Well done. This chapter was nicely written. Will be awaiting more chapters.