I enjoyed both the back story and the build up of the story. It was a sweet story to read and a great way of bring a shipped couple together. Hope to read more soon.

Awww!!! *Sniff-sniff* that was such a great happy ending!!? Thank you for your story!

Nice story! Good forst try. hope to read more from you.

This was a beautiful story. It was nicely written and I enjoyed reading it. It ended quite nicely but if you ever decide to make a continuation, I would love and enjoy reading that too. Excellent writing and a job well done. I am a fan now.

This story was lovely.

How God Created Mother

Good took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

There are Angels
God put on this Earth
Who care for us and guide us.
You can feel their love and gentleness as they walk through life beside us.
They do great things for us every day they whisper in our ears, they even hold us in their hearts when we are filled with all our fears.
They are always there to give us a hug and try to make us smile.
They treat us with the respect and love, they treat us like their own child.
God blessed me with an Angel, I’m proud to call my own.
She’s been with me throughout my life, been with me as I’ve grown.
She’s guided me the best she can, she’s taught me like no other, and I’m thankful I’m the lucky one who get’s to call her
Mother

love love it love it, but the only problem is I wnat more!!

could you please do a sequal about how she is intergrated into his royal court, and about there children and how they live to see Kagomes time.

please and thank you

I wouldn't consider this story sad, rather quite beautifully spun. It might have only been a one-shot, and there where some slight grammar mistakes, but you managed to convey their emotions (fear and vulnerability) so well. Thank you for deciding to write this, I really enjoyed reading it.

-Literary Fan

P.S. I look forward to reading more stories from you.

I want to say that was one of the best one shots I have read in a long time. Hoping to read more of your work. Consider me a fan

What a beautiful story. I loved it.