Amazing first chapter! You've captured Sesshoumaru's thought processes in the most substantial and honest way. I acknowledge that you have obviously spent so much time honng your writing craft, so thank you for gifting this fandom with your words. I'm going to read the rest of the chapters, but I'm going to savor them slowly. Like a good piece of chocolate.
Kae (Chapter 6) - Sat 31 Dec 2016
Wooooo! I had to go back to re-read and remind myself, but that's no trial as I enjoy your writing so much! :) Thanks for the update!
Pamela (Chapter 6) - Sat 31 Dec 2016
i love the comfortable relationship they have;)
Koree (Chapter 5) - Thu 06 Oct 2016
Oooooo people in the shadows are never good.... unless it's Sesshomaru lol
Pamela (Chapter 5) - Sat 09 Apr 2016
This is so good. I hope you continue this:)
That aws cool! I wonder whats up with the shadowy figures though...
This chap was pure gold. Very well written and smooth. It also opened up so many new doors.
Eva (Chapter 5) - Mon 28 Mar 2016
I'm enjoying this very much. I can't help but think of San and Princess Mononoke. The encounter with the avatar was very well done.
I am very pleased to have popped back onto Dokuga to find this piece of work. The progression of Kagome and Sesshomaru's relationship is flowing along so well and I find it very endearing. Honestly, I have done the same thing as Kagome when she killed the deer, so that scene had me twinging with such empathy and a conflicting shake of the head. Thank you so much for sharing this and I hope to see an update in the future.
But it would be sad if kagome die or just a mortal girl in the feudal era. . She wont meet her family. hmm
Saiya (Chapter 4) - Wed 02 Mar 2016
Wow he brought her Rabbits and She Got the Bigger Kill.
Thanks for the update. Really inu and his wife don't need any more mention.
Poor Kags and the poor fawn!
Eva (Chapter 4) - Wed 02 Mar 2016
I love this story so far. You've handled things very well. It's funny, but Kagome's inabilty to deal with killing somethingfor food irratates me. You would think she would be over it by now, but I have to believe that it is so very canon.
New reader here and definitely enjoying your story. I love how you write. ^_^
hopuchan (Chapter 3) - Wed 10 Feb 2016
Love this story so far. Surprised that Inu took some random village woman as wife but it makes sense for the plot. I also love how you're portraying sessh and kags; it feels very true to character to me. I can't wait to continue to follow their adventure.
I'm happy to have a new story to read and obsess over, so thanks! More chappies please!
Nice cliffhanger! Love the story so far, I'm looking forward to more!
JoLynn (Chapter 3) - Mon 08 Feb 2016
EEEK! This is such a natural progression... it's addicting! OMG thank you for updating. I hope you have the next chapter under way because I really need to know what stopped him!
Happy writing :)
I think it's great! I look forward to following this story.
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