i was very dissapointed when i scrolled to the end of chapter 3 nd there was now [>>] there for me to  click. but i have some1 i think can fix that...*hint hint*
I hope that you update this story soon. I really like it so far. :) 
      
Aliah (Chapter 3) - Sun 01 Nov 2009 
Nice! .....Is it going to be finished? It hasn't been updated in a while. :p  
  
      
Oh...Oh... More please! Update soon! 
      
Kiyanae (Chapter 3) -  Tue 10 Feb 2009 
| This story is really good so far, I like the whole kagome is the hero twist, new to me. neways update asap.
ja!!!
       
Akumi (Chapter 3) -  Sat 07 Feb 2009 
WAH! FINISH IT! You've got me on a kick and now I'm reading a story not finished! I NEVER do that! *cries* It drives me insane. 
      
| I Like it update as soon as you can.
       
| Hope to see more of the story in the months to come.
       
| This story has an interesting plot. I can't wait for the next chapter.
       
| This is absolutely awesome! I love it and can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work.
       
| wow! i really like it!
hope you will update really soon, please!!
       
too lazy to log in (Chapter 3) - Sun 05 Oct 2008 
| I enjoy your story. I like your writing style. It's descriptive and to the point. Your characterizations are on par, and your plot is cute. I would very much like more and at a faster pace if possible. Though, just more would do.
       
Jasmine (Chapter 3) - Sun 05 Oct 2008 
| i enjoy the story its gudd plz write more
       
| yea you did place the chapter in the summary section i was wondering what happened, but this is really good please continue soon i cant wait to read more
       
| Oh gracious! I love this story and can't wait to see it continued on Dokuga, but I think you placed the chapter in the summary!!! You better reformat it! ~_^ I'm looking forward to more.
       
Jill Dozer (Chapter 3) - Fri 03 Oct 2008 
| It's a good story so far but you need to reformat chapter 3. You placed chapter 3 in the summary and you need to put spaces between each paragraph.
       
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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