OMG!! This is crazy. I like how youre keeping it close to the original story, but I can't wait to see what you have up your sleeves! Yay, Rin!! :D
Chapter 419: Neither would come to harm (you're using double negative, so the meaning is opposite to what you intended; also, this is gonna mess up your word count)
Chapter 420: I do believe that the encounter with Rin happened later, when Inuyasha dicovered the windscar. But that was canon, you have your own artistic licence. And you probably know it too.
Nice read, as usual, I do enjoy these updates.
Jean (Chapter 236) - Mon 24 Apr 2017
Wonderful update, I love how you have changed it just enough to work with your story and stay true to the original. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Nope, Rin! Wonderful chapter, I'm glad Kagome is starting to remember. Its wonderful how close to cannon you're keeping the scenes, the little changes make a huge difference and its dso fun to read and see them!
awesome I am guessing he didn't use the all mother either that was pretty low. so she won't have as much to forgive. loving it and looking forward to more.
Izzy (Chapter 236) - Sun 23 Apr 2017
I'm not crying there's onions in my room
OMG!!! She's remembering!!! I need more!!!!
That was squee worthy!! Thank you X3! Loving seeing this from his side and a bit of Kagomes too.
Natalia (Chapter 236) - Sun 23 Apr 2017
Ha Finally! Rin is here as well! He is so selfless! I wonder how will kagome act now! Can't wait for more! Thx for updating!
Poor Sesshomaru, hes just trying to get INu a sword to protect Kagome!
LOL! Yes it would! Very nice update. Thanks.
Looks like our dear Sesshoumaru-sama has already figured everything out.
Interesting to see what the enigmatic Lord of the West is thinking. Since we were rarely privy to his thoughts, this is working well with your story. Nice!
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